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(急)!!!!英文作文,文發上有好多都錯,但唔識改?

Good student care others and help the student who are in the trouble. Why should need to be a good student? Because there are many bad guy in the world who steal, kill, murder, etc, so they can bring trouble to the society.For the future, so when the child in the process, we must first as a "good student".

If you want to be a good student, that should be don t late to class. on the class time, will attentively Listen instructor teaching and mask the teacher say important point to notes. Also, maybe have any questions, must be ask teacher immediately. In the home should be a book review today, and to review notes every day, do not wait until the night before the test to review your notes. Also need to take the initiative to learn extra-curricular knowledge.

In daily life,must be find friends to participate in extra-curricular activities,

Co-growth of knowledge can also promote friendship. should be like to discuss the contents of books with classmates and share thoughts with them.

If you can work toward these goals, you ll become a well-rounded and versatile student instead of being a bookworm

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    Errors and Corrections:-All corrections are found in brackets----eg.(parenthesis, eqweqweqw)

    Good students care others and help (those) students who are in the trouble. Why should (we) need to be a good student ? Because there are many bad guys in the world who steal, kill, murder, etc., so (that) they can bring trouble to the society.(No for the future,So); When the child is in the process( for his future), (he) must first (be taught a ) "good student".

    If you want to be a good student, (you) should (not) be late to class,(and be) on time. Listen (attentively to teachers) and (mark down) important point(s) to notes. Also,(if you) have any questions, (Not must be) ask (the) teacher immediately. (At home you) should (Not be a book) review (books and) notes every day. (Do)not wait until the night before the test.(Not to review your notes) ; (also) need to take the initiative to learn extra-curricular knowledge(and skill).

    In daily life,(you)must (No be) find friends to participate in extra-curricular activities. (With) co-growth of knowledge (you) can also promote friendship, (Not should be like to).To discuss the contents of books (you should) share (the) thoughts with them.

    If you can work towards these goals, you'll become (an all) round and versatitle (and approving) student(s) instead of (just) being a bookworm (who likes reading very much.)

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