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Can you help me check mistake? 編輯 I think this text have mistake.?

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TO: All staff

FM: Carol Yeung

Date: 2nd November, 2016

Subject: annuel leaves arrangement

I will be on holidays from 8th November to 15th November, 2016, during my holidays, I will be cut down check my mail box, and all e-mails reply will be returned to the company on 16th November, 2016.

During this period, my job duty will be take over by John Leung.

if you have any questions please contact me by phone at 26826822 or email to carol yeung@yahoo.com.

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  • 4 年前
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    Subject: 'annuel' leaves arrangement

    Do you mean 'annual'?XD

    '' I will be cut down check my mail box, and all e-mails reply will be returned to the company on 16th November, 2016. ''

    First,I am curious if you ' cut down' checking e-mail, which means' 'won't often check my e-mail,but i will still do it.''Better change the word 'cut down' because as if it wouldn't make sense with''and all e-mails reply will be returned to the company on 16th November, 2016. ''

    Also, after the word cut down, you should use verb+ing,I think.

    Just my opinion.Maybe some are wrong.XD

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