Writing some points in poem

Think about what you would like to choose to write in your poem with the topic "The Gospel Camp".Complete the graphic organizer below in the point form.

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Spark/Message

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    Writing some point-form in poem:-"The Gospel Camp"

    (1)Onomatopoeia=imitation to sounds=campmen---Amen

    Camp us to see the light that shines in all men,

    Help us to learn how thorns can make a crown,

    Gospel to show Love will keepJesus Amen

    And humble lift up others who are down.

    (2)Repetition=repeating the same idea or words again;eg:-weary-weary,back-track

    We must follow religion when our hearts are weary,

    Looking ahead when tired eyes look back;

    We must angrily see hope when others are feel weary,

    Someone will be our guide to those who lose the track.

    (3)Onomatopoeia=imitate sounds:-order--ordain

    Thou are ourJesus;preach us to be like thee,

    And where thou lead, we will follow one by one;

    We do not know what severe ordeal may see,

    Save the great order God ordained and done.

    (4)spark/message/lead to the cause of=Exaggeration+Climax; eg:-aweful day to glorify in thy way.

    It will be done if we be strong to follow

    The path which led Jesus to that aweful day;

    It will be done if trust&follows

    We guide ourselves to glorify in thy Way

    (5)Irony=using constantly lost--blinded

    Lord, who did send Gospel before thee,

    Set of principles act upon ten,

    That show the lost ones are seeking we

    And brings the light to eyes of blinded men

    (6)We are thy lost ones, humble guides of others,

    We are thy blind,lost leaders camping to the light;

    -----Others=parallelism=the way=when Way=dark as night=To be No.one

    Show us the Way, when ways seem past all Others;

    To be No. one, when all seems dark as night.

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