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sumyi 發問於 社會及文化語言 · 5 年前

幫我將中文版本翻譯成英文!!

我叫黃心兒,現正就讀順德聯誼總會伍冕端小學。我是一個外向樂觀活躍型的人。在學校,我參與過校園直播隊,合唱團,音樂劇和英文話劇的活動,亦代表學校參加全港兒童普通話朗誦及講故事比賽和香港學校戲劇節比賽,分別獲得銀獎,傑出合作獎和傑出舞台效果獎。這些活動我跟不同類型性格的同學合作無間,訓練出自己面對挑戰的自信心。除此之外,我也喜歡打排球,藉以鍛鍊身體關節肌肉和心肺功能。課餘我還喜歡看小說,既可從中學習不同的寫作技巧,亦可增加對不同文化的認識。在社會上我最敬重的職業是醫生,尤其是救急扶危的好醫生。我希望入讀貴校是因為你們的老師對教導的嚴謹,重視發掘學生的優點和鼓勵各種類型和性格的同學發揮所長,我很希望得到老師的循循善誘,藉以改善自己的缺點,亦可以在這氛圍中修長補短,爲入讀大學做好準備。

幫我將中文版本翻譯成英文!!(5要google翻譯!)

可以令外國老師都明ge英文版本!!

10點~Please!!!!!

更新:

My name is Jeannie. I am now studying in S.T.F.A Wu Mien Tuen Primary School. In my leisure time, I will either reading books or watch the news on the internet. My hobbies are going to the library for reading books and performance the drama, so I am the members of the School Musical.

更新 2:

At School, I have joined School Choir since P.1. Also, I have joined Campus broadcast team and English drama team.

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I attended on behalf of the school children in Hong Kong Putonghua recitation and story-telling contest and Hong Kong School Drama Festival, won the Silver Award, Outstanding Partnership Award and the Award for Outstanding stage effects were.

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In the future, I hope I can be a good doctor to save lives. I hope to enter your school, prepare for my future.

上面系我自己翻譯ge,有無錯?

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  • 5 年前
    最愛解答

    在學校,我參與過校園直播隊,合唱團,音樂劇和英文話劇的活動,亦代表學校參加全港兒童普通話朗誦及講故事比賽和香港學校戲劇節比賽,分別獲得銀獎,傑出合作獎和傑出舞台效果獎。

    應為:

    I have participated in the "school radio drama team"(不明白校園直播隊指甚麼), choir and drama ensembles at school. Also, I was very honoured to be chosen to take part in competitions representing my school. We won the silver awards in both outstanding teamwork and outstanding stage effects category.

    希望幫到你啦,面試加油

    2015-02-28 21:49:41 補充:

    在社會上我最敬重的職業是醫生...爲入讀大學做好準備。

    I admire doctors a lot, as many of them are sacrificial. I wish to apply for this school because I have observed that the teachers here are very patient and they are willing to find out the strength of students with different personalities, thus encouraging them to ...

    2015-02-28 21:51:41 補充:

    make good use of their abilities. I hope I could get advice from teachers, so that I am able to improve my weaknesses in this new environment.

    資料來源: 自己(如有錯漏實在抱歉ww), myself
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  • 5 年前

    自從失戀後,看到路上成雙成對,就格外放閃,嘴巴瀟灑說只是少一個人來愛,但不可否認還是希望可以多多認識新的朋友,

    往認真爬文3個月以上,終於找到隱藏在網路中,傳說中的李姐,

    在今年3月初就預約來找,果然是口碑相傳,不做廣告的,我排第3次就遇到雙方非常有感覺的,目前是暫停排約,

    李姐那邊可以暫停排約1次,會員時間可以展延拉長時間,也在這段時間可以觀察對方.

    推薦給有需要的朋友參考

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  • 5 年前

    hi.sumyi

    我叫黃心兒,現正就讀順德聯誼總會伍冕端小學。我是一個外向樂觀活躍型的人。在學校,我參與過校園直播隊,合唱團,音樂劇和英文話劇的活動,亦代表學校參加全港兒童普通話朗誦及講故事比賽和香港學校戲劇節比賽,分別獲得銀獎,傑出合作獎和傑出舞台效果獎。這些活動我跟不同類型性格的同學合作無間,訓練出自己面對挑戰的自信心。除此之外,我也喜歡打排球,藉以鍛鍊身體關節肌肉和心肺功能。課餘我還喜歡看小說,既可從中學習不同的寫作技巧,亦可增加對不同文化的認識。在社會上我最敬重的職業是醫生,尤其是救急扶危的好醫生。我希望入讀貴校是因為你們的老師對教導的嚴謹,重視發掘學生的優點和鼓勵各種類型和性格的同學發揮所長,我很希望得到老師的循循善誘,藉以改善自己的缺點,亦可以在這氛圍中修長補短,爲入讀大學做好準備。

    My name is Huang Xiner, is now studying in Shunde Association Wu Mian end primary school. I am an outgoing and optimistic active type of person. In school, I participated in a campus broadcast team, choir, musicals and English drama activities, also on behalf of the school children in Hong Kong Putonghua recitation and story telling competition and Hongkong School Drama Festival Competition, won a silver award for outstanding cooperation respectively, and stage effect award. Students with different types of cooperation in these activities I character without training, face the challenges of their own self-confidence. In addition, I also like to play volleyball, to exercise joint muscle and heart and lung function. Spare time I also like to read novels, can learn from different writing skills, can also increase the understanding of different cultures. I most respect in society of the occupation is a doctor, especially the good doctor emergency distress. I hope in your school is because of your teacher to teach rigorous, pay attention to explore the advantage of students and encourage various types and personality of students play director, I really hope to get the teacher's be good at giving systematic guidance, to improve their own shortcomings, also can be in this atmosphere

    of slender short, prepare for admission to the university.

    To wliile ^^

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