Tom stated that an notice / form sample would give to Evan for his reference and to distributed for residents to fill in their choice.
Please help me to check above sentence whether i make grammatical mistake.
Thanks you very much!!
- 6 年 前最佳解答
Tom的意思是叫 Evan 派回條給居民填寫:
Tom stated that a sample of the reply slip will be given to Evan for his reference and onward distribution to residents for them to fill in their choices.
2014-06-15 15:02:21 補充：
onward distribution (of the reply slips) = make copies and deliver them
2014-06-15 15:05:04 補充：
Sorry, 應該是: Evan收到樣本之後，他就會分發回條給居民。
- TOMING88Lv 76 年 前
Errors and corrections:-
Tom presented a sample acknowledged
to Evan for his reference
distributed the copies
to fill in.
Hence you've subject and predicates.
- 七瀨 遙Lv 76 年 前
Tom stated that [templates of the reply slip] would [be given] to Evan for his reference and [x to] distributed [to] residents [for them to] fill in their [choices].
2014-06-14 21:54:02 補充：
不過我覺得用複本 copies 好似會比較合理
2014-06-15 00:09:47 補充：
因為通常唔會比 sample 人填，而係比 copies