siumui 發問於 社會及文化語言 · 7 年前

詢問句子文法

各位:

下列句子文法是否正確?

中文意思(是這份月結單取代之前嗰份文件)。但字眼一定要用supersede

好正式通用書面語放在文章頂。

This Statement of Accounts (P-012-14) replaces and supersedes our previous document of 25/3/14.

謝謝!

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  • 匿名
    7 年前
    最愛解答

    句子文法

    (不要理會樓上TOMING88歪曲答題,莫名奇妙?)

    中文意思(是這份月結單取代之前嗰份文件)。但字眼一定要用supersede 好正式通用書面語放在文章頂。

    你的句子"This Statement of Accounts (P-012-14) replaces and supersedes our previous document of 25/3/14."句子文法沒有問題,現在式動詞replaces和supersedes用得都正確。

    如果要改,我會改"Statement of Accounts"為"Monthly Statement"寫月結單, 另外取消和"supersedes"一樣意思的重覆了的"replaces"一字:

    "This Monthly Statement (P-012-14) supersedes our previous document of 25/3/14."(這份月結單 (P-012-14)取代之前25/3/14嗰份文件)

  • YIP
    Lv 7
    7 年前

    This Statement of Accounts (P-012-14) replaces and supersedes our previous document of 25/3/14.

    Amendment: The monthly statement #P-012-14 should supersede our previous one issued on March 25, 2014.

    資料來源: Partly according to ” The Advanced Learner's Dictionary of Current English with Chinese Translation ” published by Hong Kong Oxford University Press in 1975
  • This Monthly Statement (P-012-14) supersedes our previous document of 25/3/14.

    I think it is correct,but it is not the best.

    My answer is"This Monthly Statement (P-012-14) supplants our previous document of 25/3/14."

    (replaces and supersedes are the same meaning.),So it is wrong!!!

    I think I can help you more^^~

    資料來源: myself
  • 7 年前

    純個人意見:

    無得改, 因 "字眼一定要用 supersede"

    supersede 這個字用錯

    在 business 上, supersede 不是這麼用.

    簡單的字,有時還清楚. 好過一知半解亂用.

    回答者:TOMING88 的句子,

    grammar (subject-verb agreement) 與 spelling 都是錯.

    .

    2014-03-25 23:44:00 補充:

    supersede 有少少不同 replace, 在 agreement 中, 有”supersede and replace“ 這個 phrase, 連接一起用, 在 legal term 上, 兩個字不是一樣 meaning.

    2014-03-27 04:29:39 補充:

    “It replaces and supersedes any and all oral agreements between the parties, as well as any prior writings” ~ 在 ENTIRE AGREEMENT 其中一句, 取自

    http://www.nolo.com/legal-encyclopedia/amending-ex...

    忘記發問者只問句子文法, 文法是正確. (我講 usage 是多餘)

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  • 7 年前

    This Statement of Accounts (P-012-014) superscede our previous available Statement of Tue 25/3/14 by more recent "supersedes" 23/3/14.

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