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Nick is writing an email to his friend James. Read the email. There is one mistake in each numbered line. Correct the mistakes. Underline a word that is incorrect and write the correct word above it. Mark the position of a missing word whit a "v" and write the missing word above it.If a word is not necessary, cross it out.

1 of the time playing a football.Afterwards, I drank at least four

2 Coke to cool me down.

3 Ben lit the barbecue. At first, he used papers instead of

4 charcoals. Silly boy! However, his cooking was good. I ate so much!

5 In fact, I ate four steak! My sister Mia doesn't like steak so l had her share too

6 Oh, l nearly forgot! Some of Mia's hairs caught fire when she leant

7 over the barbecue.Ben poured waters over her and put the fire

8 out quickly. lt was really scary experience! l'll weite again when

9 I have a time nect week.

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  • 6 年 前
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    1 We spent time playing a football. Afterwards, I drank at least four

    2 Cokes to cool me down.

    3 Ben lit the barbecue. At first, he used paper instead of

    4 charcoal. Silly boy! However, his cooking was good. I ate so much!

    5 In fact, I ate four steaks! My sister Mia doesn't like steak so l had her share too.

    6 Oh, l nearly forgot! Some of Mia's hair caught fire when she leant

    7 over the barbecue. Ben poured water over her and put the fire

    8 out quickly. It was a ("v") really scary experience! I'll write again when

    9 I have (a "X") time next week. = I have time next week.

    Comment

    1. A main verb is missing in the first sentence. "of a" is replaced with "We spent"

    2. Coke should be plural. (~ not one Coke, but four Cokes)

    3. "paper" (紙) is an uncountable noun ~ no plural.

    4. "charcoal" (木炭) is an uncountable noun ~ no plural

    5. "steak" should be plural. (~ not one steak, but four steaks)

    6. "hair" (頭髮) is an uncountable noun ~ no plural. When hair is a countable noun, it means 毛. For example, two hairs 兩條頭髮,兩條毛

    7. "water" (水) is an uncountable noun ~ no plural

    8. Determiner "a" is missing. ~ a really scary experience

    9. delete "a" since time (時間) is an uncountable noun. You don't put a definite article in front of an uncountable noun.

    "time" can be countable if it means 次數

    Typo errors:

    8. weite (write)

    9. nect (next)

    Notation used:

    "v" = insert

    "X" = cross out; delete

    2013-12-31 04:35:23 補充:

    CORRECTION:

    1 ... of the time playing (a "X") football. Afterwards, I drank at least four

    Comment

    football 足球 is an uncountable noun.You don't put a definite article in front of an uncountable noun.

    The first sentence is incomplete. Assume there is another line above.

  • 6 年 前

    One mistake in each numbered line has been corrected with corrected words,missing words, and unnecessary words have been left out.Judge and decide yourself.

    (1)To the time of playing football. Afterwards, I drank at least 4

    (2)Cokes to cool me down.

    (3)Ben lit the barbecue fire. At first, he used paper instead of

    (4)charcoals. Silly boy ! However, his cooking was good. I ate much !

    (5)In fact, I ate 4 steaks ! My sister didn't like steak so I had her share too.

    (6)Oh, I nearly forgot !Some of Mia's hairs caught fire when she leaned

    (7)over the barbecue. Ben poured water over her and put the fire

    (8)out quickly. It was really scary experience ! I'll write again when

    (9)I have time next week.

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