求dse英文作文範文

在之前上堂時,阿Sir講我地的英文作文在DSE時只會拎到五級

就算比了五星星的範文我地睇,我地都唔會識做

所以我想問各位大大可唔可給一份在dse時拎到五星星的英文範文我呀?

在範文中我想要有埋題目同埋標記埋一D能拎到高分的關鍵句子我呀。

我真係想在英文作文拎到高分呀,唔該。

更新:

不如你SHOW埋邊一到值你拎到五星星既級數啦

我要記低D重要句式THANKS

更新 2:

而家可以比我嗎?

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  • 7 年前
    最愛解答

    題目: Write a letter to the editor to explain the reasons behind compensated dating and suggest solutions to it( around 400 words)

    In the wake Of the death of a 16-year-old Wong Ka Mui who took part in compensated dates, people start to be concerned about whether compensated dating has become increasingly pervasive.The consequences of compensated dating are far-reaching. What are the underlying reasons?

    The culprit is the materialism in society. The growing affluence of Hong Kong has improved our quality of life, but it has also encouraged our teenagers'desire for material comforts. The belief that ''money is everything'' is deep-rooted in Hong Kong. Many teenagers are enthusiastic about brand-name products such as Louis Vuitton and Gucci, as these expensive goods show a higher social identity among their peers. However, young girls are too young to afford such a luxury. As a result, they turn to compensated dating, a shortcut to money. It is said that girls can earn $500 dollars in each compensated date. No wonder compensated dating is getting more and more ubiquitous.

    The social atmosphere is not the only thing to blame though. Had sex education properly been provided by schools and parents, less girls would have gone on compensated dates.In school, sex education is seldom incorporated into the curriculum. Correct sex education tells us the correct attitude towards sex. For example, we should treasure our virginity and avoid underage sex. Yet, these values are not fully instilled into our youngsters' unsophisticated minds. Also, parents keep their mouth sealed about sex.''The more they know about sex, the more likely to try it.'' Parents defended. Consequently, young girls do not develop a right attitude towards sex, nor do they take compensated dating as something important.

    2013-12-23 14:36:29 補充:

    hope that they can help u

    Merry X'Mas :):):)

    2013-12-24 02:27:36 補充:

    maybe later ...i am.also foghtong for time...really very soon

    2013-12-30 14:50:57 補充:

    maybe i list here

    many profound vocab that u can find

    like culprit,underlying reasons,

    The social atmosphere is not the only thing to blame though. such sentence pattern

    fully instilled into our youngsters' unsophisticated minds.

    quite a gd sentence

    ubiquitous.- common ,gd word

    2013-12-30 14:51:56 補充:

    and.... seldom incorporated into the curriculum.

    a good sentence ar

    The growing affluence of Hong Kong has improved our quality of life,

    a very fluent and without grammatical mistakes

    actually

    2013-12-31 04:51:24 補充:

    u are so welcome Edwin

    Glad that i can help

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    7 年前

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