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Mr. Zhou Zunde = 周尊德 如名字不對 請幫忙改

For the local souvenirs which can represent Hong Kong for the delegates to purchase and the selling places near the chosen hotel .

I would suggest a postal card because Check Landmark Mandarin Oriental Hong Kong Hotel guests will receive free Mr. Zhou Zunde famous paintings in the "Road Birds", "Road horse", "a crane" and "Road Hill" set of postcards.

Mr. Zhou Zunde is one of the Chinese Ministry of Culture approved by 100 artists,

his Yin and yang philosophy of balance and harmony inspiration , it is good as echoes the Mandarin Oriental Hotel Group is a world-renowned oriental culture and human services

The postcard with the value of the Oriental culture, like-minded attitude towards art and life in balance. Just represent the Chinese and Mandarin Oriental Hotel.

Second, I would suggest the embroidery in Lascar Row because it is the selling places near the chosen hotel can by . Embroidery is one of China's ancient craftsmanship, Chinese handmade embroidery craft, has 2000 years of history

Applying uniform fine embroidery needle, color-rich, popular for painting with embroidery, decorative pieces. The main purpose of life, including embroidery and decorative arts, such as clothing, bedding, tablecloths, stage artwork.

Embroidery works are mainly pillow, bonnet, Guodu, curtain, insoles, dust ruffle, sewing kit, purse, animal toys, and its contents are mostly insects, fish and custom screen

Since the embroidery is China craftsmanship, and there is not much in foreign-related products, coupled with beautiful embroidery work, mature, sophisticated workmanship, very good-looking, with a Chinese flavor, so choose as hand embroidery believed to be re-fit .

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  • Jenkin
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    6 年 前
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    For the local souvenirs which can represent Hong Kong for the delegates to purchase and the selling places near the chosen hotel.

    I would suggest a postcard because Check Landmark Mandarin Oriental Hong Kong Hotel guests will receive free Mr. Zhou Zunde famous paintings in the "Road Birds", "Road horse", "a crane" and "Road Hill" set of postcards.

    Mr. Zhou Zunde is one of the Chinese Ministry of Culture approved []100 artists.

    His Yin and yang philosophy of balance and harmony inspiration, it is good to echo the Mandarin Oriental Hotel Group as a world-renowned oriental culture and human services. [連上第一段的主題]The postcard promotes the value of the Oriental culture, like-minded attitude towards art and life in balance. It represents the Chinese and Mandarin Oriental Hotel.

    Second, I would suggest the embroidery in Lascar Row because there are retail outlets near the hotel where guests can buy(purchase). Embroidery is one of China's ancient craftsmanship, Chinese handmade embroidery craft, has 2000 years of history.

    Applying uniform fine embroidery needle, color-rich, popular for painting with embroidery, decorative pieces. The main purpose of life, including embroidery and decorative arts, such as clothing, bedding, tablecloths, stage artwork. [全段沒有主詞-動詞…非完整句…電腦都提你這兩句是fragment.請自修改]

    Embroidery works are mainly pillow, bonnet, Guodu, curtain, insoles, dust ruffle, sewing kit, purse, animal toys, and their [對應主詞是Embroidery works] contents are mostly insects, fish and custom screen[不明甚麼是custom screen特製布幕/紗帳?].

    Since the embroidery is a Chinese craftsmanship, and there is not much in foreign-related products, coupled with beautiful embroidery work, mature, sophisticated workmanship, very good-looking, with a Chinese flavor, so choosing [] hand embroidery is believed to be re-fit[請解釋你想表達甚麼是re-fit的中文-這詞英文意思是「修理」,我估你想講是港式英語的good fit係可以的。]. 注意標點符號有些寫錯和遺漏。

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