Tommy 發問於 社會及文化語言 · 7 年前

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以下篇文係我既reflection record:

The levels of gases, such as carbon dioxide and methane, which is in the

atmosphere that drive global warming increased to a record high in

2012. Carbon dioxide was the most important of the gases as they could

track by human activities. Also, plants, trees, the land and the oceans

were absorbed partly carbon oxide.

In the reading passage, global warming is a serious problem in our

world. Carbon dioxide is almost produced by industry. We need

energy to maintain life. Fossil fuel is a resource which can provide

electricity or energy for us. Combusting fossil fuel release lots of carbon

dioxide. Using fossil fuel is unavoidable. Besides, I need to reduce the

use of energy.

Unfortunately, I now feel hopeless as the professor and people cannot think best measures to prevent the global warming. But it lets me understanding that the environment must be protected. In next step, I need to concern about this information. In my life, I will use the less energy of electric equipment such as induction cooker.

For make sentences:

1.Revolution (n.)

2.Inhospitable(adj.)

3.Moot (v.)

4.Evolutionary(adj.)

5.Incredibly(adv.)

以上既vocabulary 一定要relate番有關science既野 作一句complex sentences

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  • 7 年前
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    The levels of gases, such as carbon dioxide and methane, which [are] in the atmosphere [x that] [driving] global warming [reached] a record high in 2012. Carbon dioxide [is] the most important of the gases as they could

    [be tracked] by human activities. [It is partly absorbed by] plants, trees, the land and the [ocean].

    In the reading passage, global warming [was described as] a serious problem in our world. Carbon dioxide [was] produced [almost] by [the] industry. [As] we need energy to maintain [our daily life,] fossil fuel [x is] [,] a resource which can provide [us] electricity [and] energy [x for us] [, was used extensively.] [Although the combustion of] fossil fuel [releases] lots of carbon dioxide[,] using fossil fuel is unavoidable. [So,] [there is a] need to reduce the use of energy.

    [Sadly], [after the reading,] I [x now] feel hopeless as the professor and [the others] cannot think [up the] best measures to prevent [x the] global warming. But [this also] lets me [understand] that the environment must be protected. [And now], I [am more concerned] about [the news of global warming]. In [everyday] life, I will [turn to] use [energy-efficient electrical appliances] such as [the] induction cooker.

    1. The industrial revolution has completely changed our life, which sped up the advancement of science and technology.

    2. Contrary to what people thought, the surface of Mars is inhospitable, as the photos taken by the satellites show.

    3. Scientists from both sides mooted in the conference, so as to defend their own viewpoints.

    4. Evolutionary processes are the fundamentals of Darwin's theory, which have been debated over and over.

    5. The temperature of the surface of the Sun is incredibly high, even higher than the core of the Earth.

    2013-11-17 23:01:54 補充:

    The temperature of the surface of the Sun is incredibly high, even higher than [that of] the core of the Earth

  • 7 年前

    Check Grammar in Complex sentences:-

    (1)Revolution (n):-The release of Co2 and methane by humans led inevitably to the gases revolution.(2)Inhospitable(adj):-Global warming will be a serious problem meaning an inhospitable place for us to live in.(3)Moot (v):-The questions of reducing the use of fossil fuel was mooted in the council.(4)Evolutionary(adj):-We must develop an evolutiionary idea to reduce the use of fossil fuel.(5)Incredibly (adv):-As the professor and people can't think best measures to prevent global warming, I think they are an incredibly stupid people.

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