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*請幫忙修改Analysis help!!!!!!第四

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我有一篇英文文章要做分析Analysis,,但我唔識,求幫忙~

要求:其實大致上說說這篇文章分段落分part,再說每part的中心思想同attract interest in the essay topic and provide an overview of the essay or try to find thesis statement就ok!

不需做到好緻細,thanks^^

Yes, we are bigger than our schedules. So how do we make sure our lives are not overpowered by an endless roster of responsibilities? Especially in an age where de-manding jobs, two-worker households or single-parent families make the joyous details of everyday life—cooking supper from scratch or organizing a block party—seem like an impossible dream? There is no set of easy answers, despite what the marketers of new convenience products would have us believe. But that doesn’t mean we can’t make real steps to take back our lives.

Part of the answer is political. So long as Americans work longer hours than any other people on Earth we are going to feel hemmed in by our schedules. Expanded vacation time for everyone, including part-time and minimum wage workers, is one obvious and overdue solution. Shortening the work week, something the labor movement and progressive politicians successfully accomplished in the early decades of the 20th century, is another logical objective. There’s nothing preordained about 40-hours on the job; Italy, France, and other European nations have already cut back working hours. An opportunity for employees outside academia to take a sabbatical every decade or so is another idea whose time has come. And how about more vacation and paid holidays? Let’s start with Martin Luther King’s birthday, Susan B. Anthony’s birthday, and your own! Any effort to give people more clout in their workplaces—from strengthened unions to employee ownership—could help us gain much-needed flexibility in our jobs, and our lives.

On another front, how you think about time can make a big difference in how you feel about your life, as other articles in this cover section illustrate.

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Note how some of your most memorable moments occurred when something in your schedule fell through. The canceled lunch that allows you to spend an hour strolling around town. Friday night plans scrapped for a bowl of popcorn in front of the fireplace.

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Don’t be shy about shucking your schedule whenever you can get away with it. And with some experimentation, you may find that you can get away with it a lot more than you imagined.

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要求:其實大致上再說中心思想同attract interest in the essay topic and provide an overview of the essay or try to find thesis statement就ok!

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  • 6 年 前
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    ------Analysis No. 4-------(1)The Part with thesis statement=topic sentence:-

    (1a)We must try control our schedule.

    (2b)We've learnt American work shortest hrs. due to Politics.

    -----The union and employees can influence our job flexibility !

    (3c)How to deal with your schedule if replanned according to your time-life relationship ?

    (2)The attract interests with lists of details related:-

    (1a)whether the couple,single working are in demanded job,

    whether cooking and party can be held,

    whether new market-products helpful,

    whether we still want real life.

    (2b)an extended vacation,

    shortened working week,

    labour movement 20th Century estalished,.

    Europe nation works 40 hrs

    long holiday every decade demanded

    more vacation+paid holidays

    (3c)Don't keep your schedule of lunch but for a walk thru-town

    a schedule of Friday night being re-schedule to eating popcorn at home !

    Hence new-deal and order on your planned list of schedule, if possible.

    (3)Overview of essay related in the writing:-

    The American and Union have given us some ideas on how to deal with our schedule based on a re-planned way. Hence ourselves, our schedule.

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