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*請幫忙修改Analysis help!!!!!!第二

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我有一篇英文文章要做分析Analysis,,但我唔識,求幫忙~

要求:其實大致上說說這篇文章分段落分part,再說每part的中心思想同attract interest in the essay topic and provide an overview of the essay or try to find thesis statement就ok!

不需做到好緻細,thanks^^

The acceleration of the globalized economy, and the accompanying decline of people having any kind of a say over wages and working conditions, is a chief culprit. Folks at the bottom of the socio-economic ladder feel the pain most sharply. Holding down two or three jobs, struggling to pay the bills, working weekends, no vacation time, little social safety net, they often feel out of control about everything happening to them. But even successful professionals, people who seem fully in charge of their destinies, feel the pinch. Doctors, for example, working impossibly crowded schedules under the command of HMOs, feel overwhelmed. Many of them are now seeking union representation, traditionally the recourse of low-pay workers.

The onslaught of new technology, which promised to set us free, has instead ratcheted up the rhythms of everyday life. Cell phones, e-mail, and laptop computers instill expectations of instantaneous action. While such direct communication can loosen our schedules in certain instances (it’s easier to shift around an engagement on short notice), overall they fuel the trend that every minute must be accounted for. It’s almost impossible to put duties behind you now, when the boss or committee chair can call you at a rap show or sushi restaurant, and documents can be e-mailed to you on vacation in Banff or Thailand. If you are never out of the loop, then are you ever not working?

Our own human desire for more choices and new experiences also plays a role. Just like hungry diners gathering around a bountiful smorgasbord, it’s hard not to pile too many activities on our plates.

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An expanding choice of cultural offerings over recent decades and the liberating sense that each of us can fully play a number of different social roles (worker, citizen, lover, parent, artist etc.) has opened up enriching and exciting opportunities. Spanish lessons?

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Yes. Join a volleyball team? Why not. Cello and gymnastics classes for the kids? Absolutely. Tickets to a blues festival, food and wine expo, and political fundraiser? Sure. And we can’t forget to make time for school events, therapy sessions, protest rallies, religious services,

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and dinner with friends.

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要求:其實大致上再說中心思想同attract interest in the essay topic and provide an overview of the essay or try to find thesis statement就ok!

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  • 6 年 前
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    Analysis help-----the 2nd

    (1)part center ideas:-thesis statement=topic sentence:-

    (1a)The acceleration of global econony is the culprit for Dr. seeking help from Union.

    (2a)The pressure of new technology to be blamed;

    (3a)Human desires for cultural choice and experience analysis.

    (2)Attract interest in essay topic as a whole with analysis on data not too detail :-

    (1a)low wages, working conditions,low socio-econ class, 3 jobs to pay the bills, no weekends, no vacation,blame the destiny. Professionals blame their schedules and seeking help!

    (2a)Re:-instant action by computer orders (loosen) our schedule; every minute counts, duty must be done by e-mailing the documents, even on your vacation !

    (3a)Re:- Recently cultural choice offers many social-roles:-eg:-workers,citizens,lover, parents, artist, Spanish lessons, gymnastic classes,food, politics and events.

    (3)An overview of the essay:-

    An attempt to answer only:-

    Wealth is produced and used through studying economics and planning and economic considerations.Where is our selves, our schedules ?

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