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匿名 發問於 社會及文化語言 · 6 年 前

★help persuasive speech!

寫作文大網(persuasive):

Topic: control excessive stree and tension to to stay positive and make learning more interesting and satisfying in school

please help me to write 3 main points,each points should have an example

main points 要求的格式:problem-solution-benefit

main point 1: documents existence of problem

main point2: present solution to problem

main3: presents benefits derived from the solution

Ps.Include at leasr three example of your own experience ( one for each main point)

experience可以作 study in school /friends etc.

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  • chen
    Lv 7
    6 年 前
    最佳解答

    Topic: control excessive stree and tension to to stay positive

    and make learning more interesting and satisfying in school

    please help me to write 3 main points,each points should have an example

    main points 要求的格式:problem-solution-benefit

    See the statement above; No the form but was like this.

    圖片參考:http://ts1.mm.bing.net/th?id=H.4620840530347132&pi...

    The topic ; A woman being horrified by the condition.

    main point 1: documents existence of problem

    The lucky family met up a wild dog ,

    . the whole families were terrified so much.

    Finally, that of which all were safe.

    main point2: present solution to problem

    Describing the detail as follows;

    Such a family who is happy lives in a small town.

    Their house is near a hill , no the neighbors but alone.

    One day, a child had several encounter with a dog

    . who was wild and wilder.

    This dog was at their home with the child

    . that her was playing in the backyard.

    Her mother heard her daughter scream,

    . and looked up that its dog seemed to pounce on her .

    It's approching closer.

    How terrible they were !

    main3: presents benefits derived from the solution

    The solution looks like those ;

    Then her mother grabbed a shovel in the yard

    . and swung it at this wild dog .

    Finally, its dog ran off and her mother held daughter .

    They though that they were thankful

    . and obtained their own safety.

    [ they were thankful ....很欣慰她們平安無事 ]

    資料來源: S. H. Chen系統工程酒師的居酒屋
  • 匿名
    6 年 前

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