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A few years later,I want to open a handmade shop with someone who like to make hardcrafts.Handmade is my habbit,when I have free time,I will lokk at the work of others and research how to do.Therfore,my work had apron,bracelets or diy iphone case.My sister is good with his hands,somethime I will ask my sister teach me that I don't know how to do and we like to go to book shop to buy the book about hardcrafts and make a friends who like to make hardcrafts,when my friends birthday,I will personally give them to do it manually.Macau have Arts Fair everyyear,where people are good with their hands,before I open a handmade shop,I want to join with them and sales my handwork,also can increase my experience and challenge myself.After open our handmade shop,I hope we can let more people to know about and be interesting in handcrafting and more people like our shop and want to buy our handdmade products.Maybe it will ver busy because I also want to do a kindergarten teacher,but they are all my favourite things,so I will try my best and enjoy all of them.

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    A few years later, I want to open a handmade shop with someone who likes to make handcrafts. Handmade is my hobby, when I have free time, I will look at the work of others and research how to do. Therefore, my work had aprons, bracelets or DIY iphone cases. My sister is good with her hands, sometimes I will ask her to teach me that I don't know how to do, and we like to go to book shop to buy books about handcrafts and make friends with the others who like to make handcrafts, when my friends’ birthday, I will personally give them to do it manually. Macau have Arts Fair every year, where people are good with their hands, before I open a handmade shop, I want to join with them and sale my handwork, also I can increase my experience and challenge myself. After open our handmade shop, I hope we can let more people to know about and be interesting in handcrafting and more people like our shop and want to buy our handmade products. Maybe it will be very busy because I also want to do a kindergarten teacher, but they are all my favourite things, so I will try my best and enjoy all of them.

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  • 7 年前

    Error and corrections on English Grammar (easy contents ; simple vocabulary?)

    ------A few years later I want to open a handicraft shop with someone who likes to makes handicraft.

    ------Handcraft is my hobby whenever I have free time.

    ------I will look at the work of others and research on how to do it.

    -----Therefore my workshop had had apron,bracelets or the product diy iphone case.

    -----My sister is good and skillful with her hands. Sometimes I will ask her to teach me. And we like to go to bookshop to buy the book about handicraft and make some friends who likes the handicraft.

    ----In my friends' birthday I will personally give them my manual skillful work.

    ----Macau has Arts Fair everyyear where handcraft people meet.

    ----Before I open my handcraft shop, I want to join them and sell my handicraft work which will increase my experience and challenge myself.

    ----After opening the shop, I hope more customers will buy my goods or interested in my services from my handicraft shop.

    ----May be it will be very busy because I also want to be a kindergarten teacher; but they are all my favourite intentions.

    ----So I will try my best and enjoy all of them.

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