我想做hobby:集郵,可否給意見我關於集郵Introduction同Body 如何寫?,而且請幫忙想想 3-main points and support寫甚麼是好呢?
Begin with a question
-give credibility(real number)
-Preview 3 main points(give importance to audience)
-transition to 1 st main point
-Give 3-main points and support
use transitions(1st,2nd,3rd main points,and other where needed)
-use'i' and'my' language
-quote a classmates(from oppsite side of class)
-Give support from english outside author(extra credit)
Gain attention:Who would rather be outside having fun right now?
Introduction topic:i would like to be out cycling for seven years and competing for the last three
Preview main points:1.Equipment I use
2.Where I cycle in HK
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3.My most memorable competition
Give importance to your classmates:This will help you know my hobby and how i keep fit and have fun
Transition:e.g Now,let me begin with my first main point
1.My firse main point:Equipment I use
c:Testimony:'My classmates Sally told me she'
- 匿名7 年前最愛解答
My hobby is stamp collecting. I had collected stamps for over five years. I put all of my collections into an album,and organized them by countries. The advantages of this hobby are of three folds. First of all, I can learn different culturesand landscapes of various countries. Secondly, they provide me with a good idea of some historicalbackground. Thirdly, I know much morerenowned features of the country from this hobby. It takes me into a whole new world oftravelling.For the first advantage, if I haven’t gotten into this hobby, Iwould have never discovered the wonderful fjords of Norway. It’s a fabulous way to look at it even if itis only a small piece of it. Secondly, Iget a much better idea of the history displayed in the stamp. Sometimes I just saw the date of thehistorical event that happened in a certain country, then I will do a Googlesearch to obtain thorough information based on the stamp illustration. Thirdly, from my experience of collectingstamps from Italy, I got to know the Vatican museum which was foreign to mepreviously. When I actually got a chanceto visit this museum, I was amused by this sightseeing point of Italy. In sum, this hobby of mine is highly recommended to anyone who isinterested to learn the history background, cultural knowledge, and many otheraspects of the countries in the whole world.