What wrong word?

What wrong word in below sentences?

Dear Mr Rose,

1. It was a pleasure to meet you the other day. I was very grateful

2. that you were able to find some times in your busy schedule to visit us.

3. I thought it should be helpful if I put on paper some of the points we

4. agreed on at our meeting and indicated some with the action points.

5. We agreed which my company will act as your agent in northern

6. Europe. As your agent, we will operate on a commission basis. We will

7. charge you on the rate of 20% for sales up to 2 million Euros. On sales above

8. such figure we will charge commission on a sliding scale up to a maximum

rate of 25%

Your sincerely

Peter Find

5 個解答

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  • YIP
    Lv 7
    7 年前
    最愛解答

    Dear Mr Rose,

    1. It was my pleasure to meet you the other day. I was very grateful

    2. that you were able to spare some time for meeting with me.

    3. I thought it would be helpful to put some points in black and white that we

    4. agreed upon in our last meeting and stressed some actions as required.

    5. We agreed that my company will act as your agent in northern

    6. Europe. Then, we will manage the business affairs on a commission basis. and to

    7. charge you at the rate of 20% for sales up to 2 million Euros.

    8. On sales above such figure, we will charge commission on a sliding scale up to a maximum rate of 25%.

    Your sincerely

    Peter Find

    Address:___

    Phone:____

    Date.____

    資料來源: Partly according to ”The Advanced Learner's Dictionary of Current English with Chinese Translation” published by Hongkong Oxford University Press in 1975
  • 匿名
    7 年前

    It is unfortunate that 001yip****** 's error-strewn answer has attracted so many votes.

  • 7 年前

    Dear Mr Rose,

    1. It was a pleasure to meet you the other day. I am very grateful

    2. that you were able to find some time in your busy schedule to visit us.

    3. I think it should be helpful if I put on paper some of the points we

    4. agreed on at our meeting and indicate some with the action points.

    5. We agreed that my company will act as your agent in northern

    6. Europe. As your agent, we operate on a commission basis. We will

    7. charge you at the rate of 20% for sales up to 2 million Euros. On sales above

    8. such a figure we will charge commission on a sliding scale up to a maximum rate of 25%

    Your sincerely

    Peter Find

    2013-09-25 10:29:08 補充:

    1. Although the visit was in the past, you want to express that you [are] grateful as you are writing the letter.

    3. Same as above, the thought is "now", not when you met.

    4. Same as above, although the points were agreed upon in the meeting, your indication of the action pointss are done now.

    2013-09-25 10:29:29 補充:

    6. operating on a commission basis is a "routine practice" for this company, as an agent, so present tense should be used.

    8. We have to use either "such figures" or "such a figure". In this case "2 million euros" is one figure.

    資料來源: My Past Learning
  • Bluedy
    Lv 7
    7 年前

    Dear Mr Rose,

    1. It was my pleasure to meet you the other day. I was very grateful

    2. that you wereable to spare some time to meet us.

    3. I thought it could behelpful to put some points in written that we had

    4. agreed last meeting and pointed out some actions maybe necessary.

    5. We had agreed that my company will act as your agent innorthern

    6. Europe on a commissionbasis. We will

    7. charge your company at therate of 20% for sales volume up to 2 million Euros.

    8. On sales abovesuch figure, the commission charges will be on a decreasing scale with maximumrate of 25%.

    Yours sincerely

    Peter Find

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  • ?
    Lv 7
    7 年前

    If there is ONE mistake/wrong word used per sentence and must use the original sentence structure (because there are may way to write the same/similar meaning): 1. It was a pleasure meeting you the other day. I was very grateful

    2. that you were able to find some time[] in your busy schedule to visit us.

    3. I thought it should be useful if I put on paper some of the points we

    4. agreed on at our meeting and indicated some of the action points.

    5. We agreed that my company will act as your agent in northern

    6. Europe. As your agent, we will operate on [] commission basis. We will

    7. charge you on the rate of 20% of sales up to 2 million Euros. On sales above

    8. such figure we will charge the commission on a sliding scale up to a maximum rate of 25%.

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