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Topic:Solar Trough to be selected for the Admiralty Office

Introduction:

Promoting environmental awareness is also essential for everyone. A Solar Trough is installed in head office. The objective of this report is to explain the trend of use energy and features of solar trough. The report will be mentioned advantages of Solar 303, which is the best seller on market.

Methodology:

Two related websites were researched. Research results were conducted from Ms. Wong whereas the diagram was attached by email. The information gathered was collated and compiled.

Findings:

In websites, Solar Energy Industies Association reported that home solar use in America were produced 2,108 megawatts of installed solar electric capacity in 2009. It was sharply increasing from 1,159 megawatts in 2007. The people are interested to gain cleaner energy. There is upward trend in home solar use since solar power provides cleaner energy. Solar energy makes environmentally-friendly and more reliable.

Three basic functions of solar through are showed in diagram. Major functions of solar trough, the sun energy in receiver pipe is running at reflector. Base on parabolic shape, troughs can focus 30-60 times in the sun. It is normal intensity on the receiver pipe. Heat transfer fluid is heated by energy in solar trough. Oil is usually using the pipe. Concentrated energy will be produced. The fluid produces steam which provides powers in turbine. Electric generator is drove by turbine. The collectors are aligned on east west axis. The sun is followed when the trough is rotating. Sun energy is input in receiver tube.

Concerning research results, solar 303 has more high option and provides a green environment Solar energy does not release any harmful pollutant such as carbon dioxide. As the solar energy is clean and neutral, the fossil fuels would be reduced. Solar panels are required very little up keep. Therefore, the cost of maintenance is low. (仲有幾句同埋conclusion 唔夠位打出黎 下面仲有 順手check)

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Solar 303 has longevity since the panels can last over thirty years. Besides, the reputation of solar 303 had listed as a finalist for the Popular Science “Invention of the year” in Canada but initial cost of Solar303 is high.

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Both this reason, more budget would be proposed for the installation of the solar trough.

Conclusion:This report presents the trend of use solar energy whereas the features of solar through is provided. The report indicates the benefits of the solar 303.

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Based on the findings, installing a solar trough is best solution to increase the environmental awareness and saving our plant.

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  • 匿名
    7 年前
    最愛解答

    My suggestion

    Topic: The selection of Solar Trough for the Admiralty Office

    Introduction:

    The installation of Solar Trough in the head office of XXX promotes the essential environmental awareness among us. This report will explain the trend of energy usage and the features of solar Trough, the best seller on the market.

    Methodology:

    Two related websites were researched and the research results were collected by Ms. Wong and the diagram attachment by email. The information gathered was then collated and compiled..

    Findings:

    Solar Energy Industries Association reported on websites that in 2009 2,108 megawatts of solar electric energy was produced for homes installed with solar power in America.. It has sharply increased from 1,159 megawatts in 2007. There is an upward trend in home solar power use because people are interested to use cleaner energy and solar power provides cleaner energy. Moreover, solar power is environmentally friendly and more reliable.

    Three basic functions of solar trough are shown in the diagram.Trough systems convert the heat from the sun into electricity. The troughs rotate to follow the sun. Because of their parabolical shape, troughs can focus the sun at 30 to 60 times its normal intensity on a receiver pipe located along the east-west focal line of the trough. Synthetic oil captures this heat as the oil circulates through the pipe, reaching high temperatures. The hot oil is pumped to a generating station and routed through a heat exchanger to produce steam. Finally, electricity is produced in a conventional steam turbine.

    Research results showed that Solar 303 has many benefits and provides a green environment solar energy. It does not release any harmful pollutant such as carbon dioxide. As solar energy is clean and neutral, the use of fossil fuels would be reduced. On the other hand, solar panels require very little maintenance, so the related cost is low.

    2013-06-22 21:12:25 補充:

    The rest is continued in Comment columns.

    2013-06-22 21:13:04 補充:

    Solar 303 also has a long working life since the panels can last over thirty years. Nevertheless, Solar 303 has a good reputation and was listed as a finalist for the Popular Science “Invention of the year” in Canada.

    2013-06-22 21:14:00 補充:

    For this reason, more budget will be proposed for the installation of the solar trough.

    2013-06-22 21:14:24 補充:

    Conclusion:

    This report presents the trend of the use of solar energy and provides the features of a solar trough system. It also lists the benefits of Solar 303.

    Based on the findings, installing a solar trough is the best solution to raise our environmental awareness and save our planet.

    2013-06-23 13:12:13 補充:

    你原本無話邊間機構嘅head office,所以我用of xxx, xxx代表果個機構嘅名。

    2013-06-23 13:19:58 補充:

    上面意見1的補充內容要修補為

    Solar 303 also has a long working life since the panels can last over thirty years. Lastly, Solar 303 has a good reputation and was listed as a finalist for the Popular Science “Invention of the year” in Canada.

    2013-06-23 13:21:49 補充:

    上面意見2的補充內容要修補為

    However, Solar 303 has a disadvantage because of its high initial installation cost. For this reason, more budget will be proposed for the installation of the solar trough.

    資料來源: Solar trough systems http://www.nrel.gov/docs/legosti/fy98/22589.pdf
  • 匿名
    7 年前

    Topic:Solar Trough to be selected for the Admiralty Office

    Introduction:

    Promoting environmental awareness is essential for everyone.A Solar Trough is installed in the head office. The objective of this report is to explainthe trend of energy usage and featuresof solar trough. The report will elucidate the advantages of Solar 303 which is the best seller on the market.

    Methodology:

    Two related websites were researched. The results were conducted from Ms. Wongwhereas the diagram was attached by email. The information gathered was summarized as follows:Findings:

    In the websites, Solar Energy Industries Association reported thathome solar use in America produced 2,108 megawatts of installed solar electriccapacity in 2009. It increased tremendously when comparedto the statistics of 2007 which was 1,159 megawatts. The people are interested to gain cleaner energy. There is an upward trend in home solar use asit provides cleaner energy. Solar energy ameliorates the environment to a more friendly and reliablesense.

    Thereare three basic functionsof solar through which will be illustrated in the diagrams. The major function is the sun energy in the receiver pipe isrunning at reflector. Based on the parabolic shape, troughs can focus 30 to 60 times in the sun. It is normal intensity onthe receiver pipe. Heat transfer fluid is heated by energy in solar trough. Oilis usually using the pipe. Concentrated energy will be produced. The fluidproduces steam which provides powers in turbine. Electric generator is driven by the turbine. The collectors are aligned on eastwest axis. The sun is followed when the trough is rotating. Sun energy will then be absorbed in thereceiver tube.

    Inregards to the research results, solar303 has higher option and provides a greener environment Solar energy does not release any harmfulpollutant such as carbon dioxide, and its nature is more neutral. It will help to reduce the usage of thefossil fuels.

  • YIP
    Lv 7
    7 年前

    Introduction:

    The environmental awareness is very essential to everyone. A Solar Trough is installed in the head office. The objective of this project is to explain the trend of using energy and features of solar trough. It will mention the advantages of Solar 303, which is the best seller on market.

    Methodology:

    Two related websites were adopted for researched purposes. Then the results were collected by Ms. Wong whereas the diagram was prepared and attached to email. The information gathered was collated and compiled.

    Findings:

    According to websites, Solar Energy Industies Association reported that home solar use in America had produced 2,108 megawatts of installed solar electric capacity in 2009 as compared with that of 2007 and was sharply increasing from 1,159 megawatts. People are interested in obtaining cleaner energy. There has been an upward trend in home solar use since the solar power provides cleaner energy. It provides environmentally-friendly and more reliable source of electricity.

    There are three basic functions of solar trough are showed in the diagram. Firstly, the major functions of solar trough, the sun energy in receiver pipe is recieved from reflector. Secondly, as based on a parabolic shape, troughs can focus 30-60 times of the sun's rays on the receiver pipe of It's normal intensity. Then the fluid exists in that pipe is heated by energy in solar trough. As the result,high temperature will be resulted and then the fluid is changed into steam which generates momentum to turn the wheels of turbine. In turn the electric generator is driven by turbine. Thirdly, the reflectors are aligned on east west axis. As the sun is rotating and the trough will follow. Regarding the research results, solar 303 has more higher option and provides a green environment Solar energy which does not release any harmful pollutant such as carbon dioxide. As the solar energy is clean and neutral, the quantity of the fossil fuels would be reduced. Solar panels are required very little upkeep. .

    資料來源: Partly according to The advanced learner's dictionary of current English with Chinese translation published by Hong Kong Oxford Univerisity Press 1975
  • 7 年前

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