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匿名 發問於 社會及文化語言 · 7 年 前

改正英文文法

1.This passage is talking about many teenagers use the phone nowadays,they

think that phone can chat with their friend and send a message,but parents are worry about children who chat with and the teenagers think if they can't find the phone,they will feel isolated from friends.Sociologists point out that if this trend continues,two things are likly to happen:One is phone addiction,the second is the genuine conversation will be a driven out by superticial communication,but phone also have a agvantage ,it can receive a mock exam question and teachers can using texting to keep in touch with pupils.

2.Mma Ramotwe thinks that it would not to be easy to open a detective agency,

but when his father die,she get a lot of legacy and wants to buy a house and a business,after that,Mma Ramotwe begin decorate her detective agency and she hire Mma Makutsi to do the secretary,she is the widow of a teacher and get a hight mark in secretarial examinations.Mma Ramotwe open the office on a Monday,but no client to come,so they drink the tea to express the time,finally,they have a first client and they may not close the shop at the end of the month.

3.Ellen MacArthur is sailing solo around the world's fastest holder and she become the fasterst person is not for frme or many or winning ,is just for his boat.And Ellen MacArthur never get lonely when she in the boat,she thinks we don't know what's going to happen when there's a big storm coming so,whey we are actually in it,we can get on and do what we have to doand we need have an extreme metal toughness to overcome all the difficulties.Also the technology has become very develop,for example:it can accurately predict the weather,but rescue is stilling not guaranteed.

更新:

這些都是課文的總結,到時候是要說出來的,所以只要改正文法就可以了(用parsent tense)

更新 2:

present tense

2 個解答

評分
  • 7 年 前
    最佳解答

    你好!因為你是要口頭報告的,我就不幫你改標點符號了,請見諒!!

    1. This passage is talking about how teenagers use phones nowadays. They use phones to chat and to send messages with their friends, but parents are worry about their children. Teenagers think if they can't find their phones,they will feel isolated from friends. Sociologists point out that if this trend continues,two things are likely to happen: phone addiction, and the replacement of superficial communication over genuine conversation. However, phones also have an advantage. It can receive a mock exam question and teachers can use text messages to keep in touch with pupils.

    2. Mma Ramotwe thinks that it would not to be easy to open a detective agency,

    but when her father died, she gets a lot of legacy, and wants to buy a house and to start a business, after that, Mma Ramotwe begins decorating her detective agency and she hires Mma Makutsi to be her secretary,she is the widow of a teacher and gets a high mark in secretarial examinations. Mma Ramotwe opens the office on a Monday,but no clients come,so they drink tea to express the time,finally,they have their first client and they don't need close the shop at the end of the month.

    3.Ellen MacArthur is the world's fastest solo sailing record holder. Her purpose is not for fame, money or winning, it's just for her boat. Ellen MacArthur never gets lonely when she is on the boat,she thinks we don't know what's going to happen when there's a big storm coming so when we are actually in it,we can continue and do what we have to do and we need to have an extreme mental toughness to overcome all the difficulties. The technology has also become very developed, for example:it can accurately predict the weather, but rescue is stilling not guaranteed.

    PS. 我不是百分之百的確定答案,所以請將我的答案當作參考。我的英文也稱不上很好,但還是希望有幫上你的忙。

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  • 匿名
    7 年 前

    先將標點和拼字檢查!!!!!!!!

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