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Ugft 發問於 社會及文化語言 · 7 年前

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Why am I love it so late?

before I felt ”it” so boring and think of the schoolmates are strange that love it so much. When some talker , professional people come in the school hall told me about it is healthy , good for us .I didn’t change my feeling of it . ‘It is fake , it wasting time , let people get tire . And sometime it is a trouble maker , there are numerous news telling us that the lost hider seek help , football player hurt his leg when he played football…Yes, it is Sport . I do not like it before but after the summer I change my feeling of it.

I have taken up a new sport as a hobby . It is swimming. One day my family bring me to watch the Dragon Boat Competition .My uncle was chosen to be his team’s leader , he told me that he had high pressure but so excited at the match. The day I enjoyed the wonderful competition and appeared the water is amazing . At last time I call it danger but now I find it is awesome .There are some sports do with water .I enjoy the cool hug form this Mr. Water so I take up swimming to be my new interest .I also join the swimming class recently for hoping that can learn more knowledge of swim.

Then let me tell you about the benefits of sport . Surly people touch sport because they want to be health , keep fit and pick up a nice body shape. While sport bring the mental effects , it also affects our health of psychological . After sport body will train to be stronger , people will become more powerful and have high confident to show others their bodies. Moreover when sport start the player will set the targets for themselves such as increasing their sport time each time . As a result player feel gratify for complete the goals , they set for themselves .Sport also have team work ,player can meet more people or have a good relationship with their friends through the sport easily. That seem sport have advantages not only the psychological and mental development but also the difference community circle.

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Whereas sport have some dangers hide inside. In spite of you are the sport super lover , you should play the sport carefully.

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  • 小草
    Lv 7
    7 年前
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    Why I love it so late?

    In the past I felt ”it” was so boring and I thought the schoolmates who loved it so much are strange. When some speakers and professionals came to our school and told me that it is healthy and good for us, I still didn’t change my mind. I told myself, ‘What they said is not correct. It is time wasting. It puts people in fire. Sometimes it causes trouble. Aren’t there numerous news telling us that the losers seek help? Football players hurt their legs, and so on…” Yes, I am talking about Sports. I do not like sports before but after last dragon boat festival, I changed my feeling towards sports. I have taken up a new sport as my hobby. It is swimming. One day my family brought me to watch the Dragon Boat Competition. My uncle was chosen to be the team’s leader. He told me that the pressure was great but it was so excited at the match. That day, I enjoyed the wonderful competition and found playing in water is amazing. In the past, I called it was danger but now I find it is awesome. There are many water sports. I enjoy the cool hug so I take up swimming to be my new interest. I have also joined the swimming class recently hoping that I can learn more about swimming. Let me tell you about the benefits of doing sports. Surely doing sports keep us healthy. It also help us to keep fit and have a nice body shape. Doing sports not only train up our body to become stronger, it also maintain our psychological health. We will have a more powerful will power and have higher confidence. Moreover, … (try the balance of the article yourself)

    2013-04-12 12:17:40 補充:

    Whereas sport have some dangers hide inside

    should be:

    Whereas sports have some hidden dangers...

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  • YIP
    Lv 7
    7 年前

    Why was I loving sport so late?

    In the beinning, I felt ”sport” so boring and thinking of the schoolmates whom were loving it so much. When some speaker and professionals came to our school hall and talked about that it was healthy and good for us. I didn’t change my mind of it . As It was fake, wasting time, let us get tired . And sometime it was a trouble maker, as there were numerous news telling us that the lost hider sought help and football player hurt his leg when he played football…Yes, it was Sport . I didn't like it before but after this summer I changed my mind of it.

    I have taken up a new sport as a hobby. It was swimming. One day my family brought me to watch the Dragon Boat Competition .My uncle was chosen to be the team leader , he told me that he had high blood pressure but so excited at that race. The day I enjoyed that wonderful competition and thought that water game being amazing . At last, I call it danger but now I found it was awesome .There were some sports being connected with water.I enjoyed the cool hug from Mr. Water so I took up swimming to be my new favourite .I also joined the swimming class recently for hoping that can learn more knowledge of swimming.

    Then let me tell you about the benefits of sport . Surely people liked sport because they wanted to be healthy, keep fit and become a nice body shape. While sport brought the physical and mental effects, it also affects our psychological health. Also sport will train to be stronger and people will become more powerful and having high confidence to show others their bodies'. Moreover when sport started the players will set the targets for themselves such as increasing the length of time for each time . As a result players felt graetefully for completing their goals, that set for themselves .Sport also required team work, and player could meet more people or had a good relationships with their friends through the sport easily.

    資料來源: Partly according to The Advanced Learner Dictionary of Current English with Chinese Translation by Oxford University Press in 1975
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