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Please be informed that the duty roster has been revised on 20 March 2013.

The reason is the major project ( replace the fresh water pipe at room 04 of each floor ) that need a good technical skill staff to monitor the safety. Therefore, assistant duty engineer ( Peter ) will be on duty shift A ( 08:00 – 17:00 ) from 26 March to 30 March 2013.

Senior technician ( Chan Fai ) will be on duty Shift D ( 23:30 - 08:30 ) form 26 March to 30 March 2013.

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  • Jenkin
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    7 年前
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    Please be informed that the duty roster has been revised on 20 March 2013.

    Due to a major project ( to replace the fresh water pipe at room 04 of each floor ) that needs a good technical skill staff to monitor the safety[不用therefore], assistant duty engineer ( Peter ) will be on duty Shift A ( 08:00 – 17:00 ) from 26 March to 30 March 2013.

    Senior technician ( Chan Fai ) will be on duty Shift D ( 23:30 - 08:30 ) form 26 March to 30 March 2013.

    資料來源: 只修改最難明和混亂的文字,格式可以再簡化列出Shift A: Peter; Shift D: Chan Fai...而不是如此怪分段
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  • YIP
    Lv 7
    7 年前

    Please be informed that the duty roster has been revised on 20 March 2013.

    Because the major project ( replace the fresh water pipe at room 04 of each floor ) that need a good technicaly skilled staff to monitor the safety. Therefore, assistant duty engineer ( Peter ) will be on day shift ( 08:00 – 17:00 ) from 26 March to 30 March 2013, while Senior technician ( Chan Fai ) will be on night shift ( 23:30 - 08:30 ) form 26 March to 30 March 2013.

    2013-03-28 05:51:24 補充:

    Amendment:that needs a good technically skilled staff to monitor the safety.

    資料來源: Partly according to The Advanced Learner Dictionary of Current English with Chinese Translation by Oxford University Press in 1975
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