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Admittedly, the change of global climate is hinged on the natural regulation which has existed since for a very long time. Disappointedly, according to the latest climate research, the increases of the temperature was higher the noraml1.5c and these scientist forecasted the increasing will be higher and higher in next few years. Moreover, in last 3 decades, the area of melting glacier is growing and accelerating in a spin chilling speed, starting from human appearing on the world and building up civilization. Obviously such abnormal climate should not occur in our world with such terrific frequency, and these phenomenal have already given us a caution

In fact, since industrial revolution doubtlessly our quality of life has taken an inversion that the works mounted on the shoulder have become light but at the same time, the betterment of life has brought us a great deal of pollutants hatching out a poisonous consequences. Nowadays people are in pursuit of the convenience and efficiency, being excessive reliance to fossil fuel for the machines instead of workers. Even though these machines accommodate us in daily, the machines emerge tons of toxic gases, when working. Such gases as carbon dioxide carbon monoxide, sulphur dioxide are fatal and cause the climate change as the gases have some furthers that observe the heat coming from the sun and keep the earth warm foster the increases of temperature.

A side from the reliance from the machine, the agriculture is also the main reasons of the climate change. Without any question, forest, lungs of earth, is of paramount significance especially in the South America, but with a little heed of importance of the fortress being paid, a great amount of fortress was mashed by the farming merchants who took an advantage of the fortress becoming a steading. They, practically, did not care about what they done are conducive to the health of the earth but their wealth as a result the climate was deteriorated by human being evidently.

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  • 8 年前
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    Admittedly, the change of global climate is hinged on the natural regulation which has existed FOR a very long time.

    the increase in temperature was higher than the noraml 1.5c (<--唔mae, and scientist forecasted that there will be an increasing trend in temperature for the next few years.

    For last THREE decades, the area of melting glacier has grown and accelerated in a spin chilling speed, because of civilisation. Such abnormal climate should not occur this often. These PHENOMENA have given us a caution. <-- "it does not really link to the previous question"

    Industrial revolution doubtlessly our quality of life has taken an inversion that the works mounted on the shoulder have become light but at the same time <-- 唔make sense

    the technological advances have brought us a great deal of pollutants, hatching out a poisonous consequences.

    Nowadays people are in pursuit of the convenience and efficiency of WHAT?, and excessively reliant on fossil fuel for the machines to perform works instead of labour.

    Even though these machines accommodate us in daily, the machines produces(用emerge就唔make sense) tons of toxic gases.

    Such gases - carbon dioxide, carbon monoxide and sulphur dioxide are fatal and contribute to climate change. This is because the gases would reduce the solar reflectivity of the earth, trapping the heat energy and ultimately cause an increase in the temperature.

    BESIDES the reliance ON the machineS, agriculture is also a main reason of climate change.

    With NO DOUBT, forest - lungs of earth, HAS A paramount significance in the ecosystem. With little heeds in the importance of the fortress, a great amount of fortress was mashed by the farming merchants, who took an advantage of the fortress(唔係太明你想express what idea). They, practically, DO not care about what they have done are conducive to the health of the earth. Their avarice result in climate change and progressively get make it worse.

    資料來源: been studying in AU.
  • 8 年前

    你用了很多大型補習社教的'magic words'. 這些字如果使用得恰當,可以幫助成績好的學生考高一級,但肯定不能幫成績差的學生從不及格變為及格。

    你似乎連名詞,動詞和形容詞都分不清,不如首先打好基礎吧。

    我相信有一些字你是使用翻譯軟件搜尋的,很多時都會用得不恰當,即使偶然用得正確,考試時你又是否可以用番出來?

  • 8 年前

    ---English Grammar 1,2 3.

    (1)Abnormal behaviour in climate gives us a warning of 1.5c.

    (2)Machines accomodate us with pollutants.

    (3)Aside from the forest plantation being paid, the merchants are wealthy.

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