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匿名 發問於 教育及參考書教學 · 9 年前

Why do you come to our school

升中面試題目,可否幫忙翻譯成英文(不要用工具翻譯!)非常感激!

因為我瞭解貴校除了注重學業成績外,還鼓勵同學參加不同類型的課外活動和體育運動,我覺得這樣可發掘同學不同的才能,有助學生全面發展。

同樣,我除了努力讀書外,興趣也很非常廣泛,攝製,中國武術,普通話朗誦,游泳籃球都是我的最愛,當然還有電腦遊戲啦!

另一個重要的原因,貴校的教學理念以基督教為宗教背景,你們的校訓每一句都源於聖經的教導,我本身是一名基督徒,週日恒常同媽媽參加主日崇拜!

還有一個原因,貴校是英文中學,我很注重英文學習,因我的志向將來可以成為一名醫生,而我留意到醫生的工作與英文息息相關,例如藥品名稱,病人的記錄等等,因此我需要在中學這6年里,好好打好英文基礎。

這就是我的想法,若能有機會成為貴校的學生,我深感榮幸和自豪!

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  • 匿名
    8 年前
    最愛解答

    Since i appreciate that the school not only emphasize academic results, but also encourages students to participate different kinds of extracurricular activities and sport activities. I think that this can discover students talent and help them to have comprehensive development.

    Similarly, i study hard but still have a number of interests, such as: shooting photos, practicing Chinese martial arts, Putonghua reciting, swimming and playing basketball. They are all the interests i like the most. (我覺你唔應該講電腦遊戲, 破壞印象ga! )

    Another essential reason that i would like to study in your school is because your school teaching concept background is based on Christianity. The school motto are came from the instruction of the Holy Bible. Since i am a Christian, i attend masses every Sundays with my mother.

    The third reason that i would like to come to your school is because your school is an English- based school. For myself, i really take English seriously since my aspiration is being a doctor. Furthermore, i noticed that the work of doctor and the usage of English have an inseparable relationship, for example: names of medicine and records of patients. So therefore, i need to build up my English skills in the next 6 years in secondary.

    These are all of my ideas and i truly thank you for giving this precious interview opportunity to me. Lastly, if i could become a member of your school, i would be honored and delighted.

    2012-09-09 15:51:41 補充:

    1st paragraph line 2: 應該係"participate in", not "participate"

    3rd paragraph line 3: 刪去" Since i am" , 加 " As"

  • 8 年前

    quite a number of grammatical mistakes are discovered

    please pay more attention

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