Please proofread this sentence

Question

This watch can measure the time for a car to travel between two places.

Is that correct??

Answer 1

最愛解答

Theoretically and grammatically, it is correct.

However, it is too clumsy.

Therefore, I recommend you using this sentence instead:

This watch can measure the travelling time of a car.

You don't need 'between two places'.

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Answer 2

There are many ways to express your meaning.

One of them could be

This watch can measure the time that a car requires to travel between two places.