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Qawsed 發問於 社會及文化語言 · 8 年前

Please proofread this sentence

This watch can measure the time for a car to travel between two places.

Is that correct??

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  • 8 年前
    最愛解答

    Theoretically and grammatically, it is correct.

    However, it is too clumsy.

    Therefore, I recommend you using this sentence instead:

    This watch can measure the travelling time of a car.

    You don't need 'between two places'.

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  • 8 年前

    There are many ways to express your meaning.

    One of them could be

    This watch can measure the time that a car requires to travel between two places.

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