Please proofread this sentence
This watch can measure the time for a car to travel between two places.
Is that correct??
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- PeterChowLv 59 年前最愛解答
Theoretically and grammatically, it is correct.
However, it is too clumsy.
Therefore, I recommend you using this sentence instead:
This watch can measure the travelling time of a car.
You don't need 'between two places'.
資料來源: me - 9 年前
There are many ways to express your meaning.
One of them could be
This watch can measure the time that a car requires to travel between two places.
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