Two thieves ???

Two thieves walked around at the airport.

Thief A said , “We need to do something for our life”,

Thief B said, “What can we do?”

Thief A said: “ we just looked for someone who is rich. and we rob his belongings.

Thief B said: “How can you know somebody who is rich,

Thief A thought a while and said: “the person who has been nervous to hold on their luggage alone”,

Thief B said: that’s good thinking, we do this promptly,

After a while, Thief B said: “ The man who sit the chair alone and hold

on his bag., he is my target”,

Thief A said: “yet”,

Then two thieves walked to the man immediately but the man also walked against them too.

Two thieves thought astonishingly, “why the man is walking against us too?,

Thief B hesitated to said, “if the man is a police, we’ll arrest,

Thief A said: “wait a minute; A few peoples were standing up behind us. we may be arrested by them”,

The two thieves were shaking to raise up their hands and want to said: “we surrender at once”.

but the man and the behind of them of a few peoples was just a greeting each other.

Two thieves was happy that, they didn’t be arrested,

by the way, the two thieves didn’t do any bad thing after this event.

Would anybody mind correcting my writings? thankx

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  • 9 年前
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    The red ones are the words or punctuations I have corrected for you.

    Two thieves walked around at the airport.

    Thief A said , “We need to do something for our living ”,

    Thief B asked , “What can we do?”

    Thief A answered ,“ we can just looked for someone who is rich, and we will rob his belongings. ”

    Thief B asked , “How can you know somebody who is rich,

    Thief A thought for a while and said, “The person who is nervous when holding on their luggages alone, ”

    Thief B said, “T hat’s a good idea , we have to do this promptly, ”

    After a while, Thief B said, “ The man who is sitting on the chair alone and holding

    on his bag tightly is my target, ”

    Thief A said, “Yes , ”

    Then the two thieves walked to the man immediately but the man also walked against them too.

    The thieves thought astonishingly, “W hy the man is also walking against us ?”

    Thief B hesitated and said, “If this man is a police, we’ll be arrested , ”

    Thief A said, “Wait a minute. A few people are standing behind us. Maybe we will be arrested by them,”

    The two thieves were shaking to raise up their hands and wanted to said, “We will surrender at once.”

    However, the man and the people behind them were just greeting each other.

    The thieves were happy that they didn’t arrest by those people .

    By the way, the two thieves didn’t do anything bad after this event happened .

    P.S. I hope I can help you!!!

    2012-04-27 21:41:21 補充:

    標題:A story of two timid thieves

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