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匿名 發問於 社會及文化語言 · 9 年前

fragment sentence 句子碎片

"A competition mactch held at St.Peter High School." 呢句野有Object, 有Verb,同Subject, 就係唔知錯乜?

" This competition between St.John High School and St.Peter High School was the final ." 老師話睇唔明lol,點解呢?

明明我照住本grammer書黎寫句子,偏偏就係成日錯,有冇大師可以比個好方法我學grammer啊?

更新:

ic, 咁即係第一句就錯係被動式,第二句就係用詞不當啦,right?

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  • 匿名
    9 年前
    最愛解答

    Sentences

    "A competition match held at St. Peter High School." 錯在match是不能用主動式動詞held的,舉行比賽要用被動式was held,句子才對。例如"A competition match was held at St. Peter High School (last Sunday)."就意思完整,不是碎片了。

    "A competition match held at St. Peter High School"(意思是"A competition match (which was) held at St. Peter High School")則不是sentence,要延續其它意思才成句子,例如: A competition match held at St. Peter High School (last Sunday) was the one of the best match this season.

    "The competition between St. John High School and St. Peter High School was the final."是完整句子, grammar 也可以,但用competition(比賽)不好,因為兩隊球隊是在一場賽事(match)較量的。如果competition(比賽)為match(賽事),"The match between St.John High School and St. Peter High School was the final(決賽) of the season."就很正確完整了。

    2012-04-12 12:46:05 補充:

    ...如果competition(比賽)為match(賽事),...

    應是

    如果...competition(比賽)改為match(賽事),...

    2012-04-14 18:14:08 補充:

    2012-04-12 20:06:00 補充

    即係第一句就錯係被動式,第二句就係用詞不當啦?

    視乎你第一句和第二句原意是什麼?問者不妨先把兩句用中文寫出來看看。

  • 小草
    Lv 7
    9 年前

    "A competition mactch held at St.Peter High School."

    這句如果用‘competion’ 就唔用 'match'.。用了'match' 就唔用 ‘competion’. 另外就如 eic 所講,要passive voice.

    2012-04-17 15:01:39 補充:

    " This competition between St.John High School and St.Peter High School was the final ."

    suggestion:

    The competiton between St John High School and St Peter High school was at its final stage.

  • 9 年前

    Whether fragment sentences or not,"grammar"syntax is linguistic terms of a language Any factual errors or fatal errors in the composition depends on your English teacher,so ask your English teacher..An attempt to answer:-

    (1)A (basketball) competition (passive voice) was held at St. Peter High School (date) on April1.

    (2)(The) competition between St John High School and St. Peter High School was (adj) fierce and final.

    (3)(to be continued---) The sporting rivals had had a rivalry between the two teams in the (adj) competitive (noun) match on that date!(date added)!

    資料來源: eng.gm.bk.
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