Tam 發問於 社會及文化語言 · 8 年 前

以下兩個情況英文可怎樣寫 (有自己嘗試寫)

1. 假若我有一份AA報告,懷疑報告裡的BB和CC這兩個項目(items)的數據出錯,可怎樣要求對方檢查及修正?

Would you please help us to check the AA report on BB and CC(還是BB and CC in the AA report)? If there are typo of them, please send us the updated version.2. 假若因對方希望有一份report for 他的mthly review,要我們team幫忙建立,上司要我幫忙處理,現在因我不清楚對方需要的資料(什麼產品、project等),要求對方以電郵提供他希望/需要的資料。

According to your request, we will build the new XX report to you. Would you please kindly provide us which products or projects you concern?

另外因資料或多或少有清楚,有時候句子未必一下子符合我要求。如果能持續跟進者為佳。

更新:

第一位的相當簡潔且很清晰,也是從我的原句子修改,讓我知道錯在哪。

第二位也很詳盡,但意思上和我的有出入,因為他要求我們的,是新的報告,或可以說是在原CS report(這是我們每個月都要做的報告)內為裡加插一張,專為他所review的產品或project 整合及filter在一起。

至於第一個問題,二樓的很專業。

至於which one is the best response或者再看看第二題二樓有沒有跟進,老實說我擔心我的寫法別人或者一頭霧水。

更新 2:

兩位的解答都很詳細,二樓也有跟進解答,且非常清楚;但由於我是發問者難以評論最佳答案,交付投票

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  • 8 年 前
    最佳解答

    In the AA report we received, we have some concern on the data under items BB and CC. Please double check they are accurate and let us know. Thanks.

    We are gladly to build the XX report for you. Since there are many ways to build a report, to save us time for going back and forth, can you tell us exactly what you want in the report. If you have an old one, it would be helpful if you can send us a copy of that. We prefer you tell us by email. Thanks.

    2012-02-07 15:28:43 補充:

    concern of ( or about ), not on, sorry.

    2012-02-08 13:23:06 補充:

    Okay, see if this one meets your need.

    We are glad to add a chapter of your work in our monthly CS report. Just to make sure we do not miss your accomplishment, can you tell us exactly which reviewed products or projects you want us to include in the chapter ? Please inform us by email. Thanks.

    2012-02-09 03:51:11 補充:

    不會一頭霧水,對方緊張過你。這是他的業績。你寫了A,B,C,他可能說,你忘了D,E。或者說,C不能寫,因為還沒有做好。

    他不明白你說什麼的話,他一定倒過頭來問你。

  • Jenkin
    Lv 7
    8 年 前

    1.應該是

    Would you please help us to check the BB and CC in the AA report?

    If there are typos in them, please send us the updated version.

    2.

    According to your request, we will write up the new XX report for you. Would you please kindly provide us which products or projects of your concern?

    或者

    Would you please kindly provide us with the details of the products or projects for consolidation.

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