Wendy 發問於 社會及文化語言 · 8 年 前

eng poem(penguin)

我要寫一篇poem aboutpenguin

我打算寫Emperor Penguin

但我唔知可以點用simile ,metaphor and personification去形容佢地

我only想到1句

Its every move like a tumbler.

我希望大家可以作3句(use比喻,擬人)比我睇下 thanks

更新:

不倒翁的eng係咪tumbler?

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  • 8 年 前
    最佳解答

    The emperor penguin cannot fly Up and up to the skyIt can only walk on the iceland like a sumo westlerIt is a happy traveller

    like a sumo westler(simile)

    a happy traveller (擬人)

  • 8 年 前

    Index of Title and First Lines on poem about Penguin by Wendy

    Flightless seabird of southern heaven(simile)

    With Black upperparts and White under heart(simile)

    Walk clumsily with upright given (personification metaphor)

    Emperor and Penguin shall not depart (personification)

    (____________________________________________)

    (________________________________________________)

    Follow the beat,zone to zone(Personicfication)

    Flipper wings for a swim flight (Simile)

    In the Antarctic they seabird alone (Metaphor)

    Every move a tumbler alright (Simile)

  • 8 年 前

    metaphor:

    ~follow the beats to walk

    ~they are performing a rap music while they are walking

    ~their world only have 2 colour, black and white

    simile:

    ~body like a moai ( a stone statue in Chile)

    personification

    ~every day do dull job, eating,sleeping,playing

    ~crying when their children are kippnaped by eagle!

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