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Linda join the Pen-friend Club after,she writes letters to her pen-friend everyday.She writes letters plenty.After school,she doesn't do the homeworks,she writes letters to her pen-friend.She does homeworks at night,but she is tired,so,she can't complete the homeworks.At school,she owe the homeworks,the Class Teacher is angry,she scold Linda.Linda know her mistake.She determination amend her mistake.

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  • 10 年前
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    Linda joined the Pen-friend Club. She writes letters to her pen-friend everyday. She writes plenty of letters. She doesn't do her homework after school, but writes letters to her pen-friend instead. She does homework at night but she is tired, so she can't complete the homework. At school, she owes the class teacher a lot of homework. The class teacher got angry and scolded Linda. Linda knows her mistakes, and is determined to amend her mistakes.

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