英文詩 改進....

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如找不到..到yahoo 找' sleeping cat' 福圖係 白色果隻好似人咁訓ge貓

e度已經有人作左一首好好,有16行既詩 but 我想加到20行以上 而且想多啲形容圖內既貓/事物 因為而家首詩已經5再係看圖作詩-0-

This sleeping cat does not make any sound

Instead of lying on the ground

it lies on the mat

facing upward, lying flat

It looks bright as its hair is all white

So it could be easily seen even at night

its likes to play with a ball

I always bring it along even to a shopping mall

It has got very big eyes

it is talented and wise

Sometimes it put on my hat

and likes to play even with the rat

It waves the paws when I prepare the cat food

dancing here and there , seems to be in happy mood

This is my favorite pet

I play with this cat from sunrise to sunset

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  • 1 十年前
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    加多4句:

    It turns round and round

    without making any sound

    It always makes you smile

    especially it has slept for a while

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