tai man 發問於 社會及文化語言 · 1 十年前

請指出錯處!!!THKS!!!

請指出錯處!!!

There are three members in my family. My family is a structure engineer. He works in a construction office. My mother is a housewife. She works in my home. I am a student. I study in the school. My father is forty five years old and my mother is forty years old. I am nine years old. My father and mother work everyday. I like my father and mother very much.

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請指出錯處!!!

My family is not very rich, but we live happily together.

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  • Jenkin
    Lv 7
    1 十年前
    最愛解答

    內容可以重組有系統地表達:

    There are three members in my family. My father is forty five years old. He is a structural engineer who works in a construction site office. My mother is forty years old and she is a housewife. I am a student. I study at xxx (name) school. I am nine years old. My father and mother work everyday to pay for my education.I love my father and mother very much.

    "She works in my home."這句全錯,不是文法錯,是意思上。第一,mother works at home並不是指她是家庭主婦,而是她在家中辦她的生意/業務。第二,個home不是你的,所以my home並非英語會用的屬詞,因此只會用at home便了,因為嚴格來說個家是你父母的。

    I like my father and mother亦不太合適。like是用來表達選擇性地喜歡的東西,對於父母而表達「愛」會比較合理。但可以like來表達你父母跟你做的活動。例如:I like to play football with my father.

  • 1 十年前

    There are three members in my family. My father is a structural* engineer. He works in a construction office. My mother is a housewife. She works in my home. I am a student. I study in the school. My father is forty five years old and my mother is forty years old. I am nine years old. My father and mother work every day. I like my father and mother very much.

    *結構工程師應為 structural engineer, not structure.

    資料來源: 我係英文老師
  • F.P.
    Lv 7
    1 十年前

    'construction office' is ambiguous. Please consider:

    (1) He works in the office of a construction company

    (2) He works in a construction company

    (3) He works in a construction site

    (4) He works in the construction industry

    Godfrey is right. It is structural engineer, not structure engineer.

  • 1 十年前

    To Rai Man and kwok ping:

    是 STRUCTURAL ENGINEER, 不是 STRUCTURE ENGINEER

    EVERY DAY 應該分開, 是兩個字.

    I take a walk every day.

    EVERYDAY 一個字是形容詞 (adjective) - normally before a noun

    Please describe it in ordinary everyday English.

    2010-09-16 02:14:56 補充:

    Sorry Tai Man, I spell your name wrong. (Not Rai Man).

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  • kp
    Lv 6
    1 十年前

    分成一句句,讓你容易點看.

    There are three members in my family.

    Myfather is a structure engineer.

    He works in a construction office.

    My mother is a housewife.

    She works at home.

    I am a student.

    I study in school .

    My father is forty-five years old and my mother is forty years old.

    I am nine years old.

    My father and mother work everyday.

    I like my father and mother very much.

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