? 發問於 社會及文化語言 · 1 十年前

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這是小弟的家課,題目是:Most popular goods/products in Macao

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Macao is a dense population city and most population is Chinses.Chinese have a traditional thought is that clothes , food , residencece and travel are most important in our life and clothes is most essential at that four's.Therefore, there are many pirated clothes sneak into our life.

There are many popular sportswears' brand in Macao ,like Adidas,Nike,etc.Since that some crafty manufacturers want to catch this chance and begin to make the pirated sportswear.Most of those pirated goods stress on the shape in the original and the quality of those goods is often poor.The pirated goods are always cheaper than the original but the pirated goods are expensive than their same level goods.

Those big sportswears' companies have their own technique to make the products more suitable to the consumer and it is different for the piracy to have those advantage.Some illegal manufaturers want to make the piracy more similar to the originals so they change some cuting and break the quality to get the result.Therefore,if there are some costomers to wear those pirated goods,it might be easy to get hurt or make demage for our body.

It is had to understand why poeple would buy those pirated goods.It sounds to waste money to purchase the brand,not the products.I think some of us are misunderstanding our traditional thought.The clothes is most essential for us is it can protect ourselves and it is a kind of tool.It is not use to show.

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  • Kiefer
    Lv 6
    1 十年前
    最愛解答

    Macao is a densely populated city and majority is Chinese. In traditional thinking of most Chinese, clothes, food, residence and transport are most important elements in their daily life. Clothes come first amongst them all. Thus, the smuggling of clothes is commonly found.

    There are many famous brands of sports wears in Macao, like Adidas, Nike, etc. Some crafty manufacturers take the chance to produce fake sportswear. Most of the imitation products only focus on the outlook while the quality of goods is often poor. They are usually cheaper than the original but the imitation sportswear are expensive than those products of same quality.

    Those famous sports wears companies have their own research & development team to customize the products to suit the consumer while those imitation producers will seldom invest in this area. However, some fake producers want to make the imitation more similar to the originals & they change some cutting and break the quality to get the result. As a result, some customers may easily get injury when wearing this kind of products.

    It is hard to understand why people would buy those fake wears. It sounds to waste money to purchase the brand instead of focus on quality of product. I think some of us misunderstand the traditional thinking. Clothes are the most essential to us because it can protect ourselves. It is just a kind of tool instead of a mean to show off.

  • 1 十年前

    there are one mistake i read so far .for example,it is had to understand(had should be hard) .in addition,is it can protect ourselves.....i think the sentence can change to can it protect ourselves. it is not use to show . the sentence can change to many of us misuse the tool as a display(炫耀) i hope it can help you...

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