Oi Kei 發問於 社會及文化語言 · 1 十年前

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After I watched this movie,I think the company are so selfish,it is because the company only thinking of how much they can earn,they do not thinking of the quality of the food and waht will happen if the people eat the food which have problem.

Beside that,it is horrible for me to know that the factories which produce food are so dirty when they are making the food.Also,the factories also change the DNA of the food,and it is not good for human body,but the speaker of the company said that it is not problem,are people problem,because if people do not buy the produce from us,they will not get sick.I think it is not a responsible answer.

Lastly,I think the government should do something to control the qulity of the food.I will choose the food produce carefully in the future.

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  • 1 十年前
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    原文:After I watched this movie,I think the company are so selfish,it is because the company only thinking of how much they can earn,they do not thinking of the quality of the food and waht will happen if the people eat the food which have problem.

    --> keep in mind that the shorter the sentence, the better it is.

    --> After watching this movie, I do think that the company is very selfish. (companies use "are", company use "is". I am not sure whether the word "company" you wrote refers to singular or plural.)

    --> The company only focuses on profits, but didn't pay attention to the consequences of selling those low quality food.

    原文:Beside that,it is horrible for me to know that the factories which produce food are so dirty when they are making the food.

    --> Besides, the unhygienic food production process shocked me.

    原文:Also,the factories also change the DNA of the food,and it is not good for human body,but the speaker of the company said that it is not problem,are people problem,because if people do not buy the produce from us,they will not get sick.I think it is not a responsible answer.

    --> Also, the changing of the DNA structure in food products is harmful to human beings. Yet the company says that changing of the DNA structure in food products is alright, and thinks that human should buy their food products as this help them not to get sick. This is totally inconceivable and nonsense.

    原文:Lastly,I think the government should do something to control the qulity of the food.I will choose the food produce carefully in the future.

    --> After all, I think the government should establish some policies in order to control the quality of food produced. I would definitely beware in choosing food products.

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    1 十年前

    After I watched this movie,I think the company are so selfish,it is because the company only thinking of how much they can earn,they do not thinking of the quality of the food and waht will happen if the people eat the food which have problem.

    Beside that,it is horrible for me to know that the factories which produce food are so dirty when they are making the food.Also,the factories also change the DNA of the food,and it is not good for human body,but the speaker of the company said that it is not problem,are people problem,because if people do not buy the produce from us,they will not get sick.I think it is not a responsible answer.

    Lastly,I think the government should do something to control the qulity of the food.I will choose the food produce carefully in the future

    翻譯

    我看了這部片子後,相信公司是太自私,因為這家的他們能掙多少錢只思考他們做不想食物的品質,如果人民吃有問題,將會發生什麼。

    旁邊的它是可怕,我知道工廠所生產的糧食是這麼髒時他們正在 food.Also,the 工廠也變化了的食物的 DNA 和它是對人類的身體不好,但公司議長說這不是問題,是人的問題,因為如果人不買從我們生產,他們不能獲得 sick.I 認為它不是一個負責任的答覆。

    最後,我認為政府應該做一些事來控制在 food.I 的品質會仔細日後選擇食品生產

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