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Three Chief Executives from the company's Head Office in Frankfurt will visit our branch office in Hong Kong .The visitors will tour the main office in causeway Bay and make a site visit our factory in Shenzhen. They will arrive to the office at 10a.m. on 12August2010.The visit will last for three hours.

On the day of the visit, everything must be neat and tidy and everyone well-dressed in order to give a good impression to visitors. Office staff please tidy up the offlice, be ready to meet them and answer questions.

Please help me check those sentence is correct or wrong, if the sentence is wrong; please help me write the right sentence. If the sentence is correct, copy the sentences and write ok.thx for helping me.

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  • ?
    Lv 6
    1 十年前
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    Three Chief Executives from headquarters in Frankfurt are planning to visit our branches in Hong Kong (this month). They will tour around our main office inCauseway Bay at 10am on 12 August, 2010 and are scheduled to visit our factory in Shenzhen (in the afternoon/in the evening/at night) for three hours.

    On the day of their visit(During their visit), our office must be kept clean and tidy and all staff are required to dress well so as to give visitors a good impression/(for giving visitors a good impression).

    All staff please tidy up the office and be ready for meeting them and answering their questions politely /(All staff please tidy up the office as well as ready yourselves for the reception and give your response to their enquiries).

    (Please help me check whether the above sentences are correct or wrong as well as amend the wrong ones accordingly and make the wordings"okey" on the correct ones.)

  • Jc
    Lv 7
    1 十年前

    (corrected version, changes made are in bold print) Three Chief Executives from the company's Head Office in Frankfurt will visit our branch office in Hong Kong on 12th August 2010 .The visitors will tour the main office in Causeway Bay and pay a site visit to our factory in Shenzhen. They will arrive at the office at 10a.m..The visit is expected to last for three hours.

    On the day of the visit, everything must be neat and tidy and everyone well-dressed in order to give a good impression to the esteemed visitors. Office staff should tidy up the offlice, be ready to meet them and answer questions.

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