L.K. 發問於 社會及文化語言 · 1 十年前

英文幫手更改一下!

英文幫手更改一下!

Game of Life

Four years since you first opened your eyes,

You’re on a carpet knowing only white and black.

Soon heavy textbooks fill your backpack,

Along with gossips, rumours, truth, and lies.

You enter university with a great surprise,

Longing for the school-free life to be back.

Before your eyes you’re in a gown all black,

Standing with your friends that are bonded with ties.Finally out of school you give a great laugh,

Believing you’re above all things and everyone.

Done with all the sciences, english, and math,

You assume that you have won.

But after many years and down the path,

You realize the game of life has just begun.

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謝謝周芷若的見意和題點

想問問大家明白第二句的意思嗎?

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  • 1 十年前
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    Game of Life

    Four years since you first opened your eyes,

    You WERE on a carpet knowing only white and black.

    Soon THE heavy textbooks fillED IN your backpack,

    Along with gossips, rumours, truthS, and lies.

    You enterED university with a great surprise,

    Longing for the school-free life to be back.

    Before your eyes you WERE in a gown all black,

    Standing with your friends that WERE bonded with ties.Finally out of school you GAVE a great laugh,

    Believing you WERE above all things and everyone.

    FINISHED with all the sciences, english, and math,

    You assumeD that you have won.

    But after many years and down the path,

    You realize the game of life has just begun.

    When you are talking about your flashback, you ALWAYS used PAST TENSE...the first sentance "Four years since you first opened your eyes" doesn't make sense too. There should be a verb following Four years. For example. Four years HAVE PASSED since..."

    2010-04-10 11:11:56 補充:

    Re: not really

    資料來源: my experience of studying English in Canada
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    1 十年前

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