lamx3 發問於 社會及文化語言 · 1 十年 前

grammer problem help me check!

Why people need NHP???

Natural and herbal supplements is good for your body .To quote Melissa Wood , a

Naturopathic Doctor located in San Antonio, Texas,” she wants to share her experience about take health product. A lot of people haven’t health problem ,marvel the reason of they need to take NHP.”So she listed 5points(Depleted soils , long transit time for delivery ,overcooking , not eating regular and normal aging).Cause she want to know why it is main that all people take some type of supplements.

relationship of Herbal and NHP

What is the herbal supplements? To quote office of Dietary Supplements , a National Institutes of Health in USA.””The Botanical is valued for Used to treat Disease. “Products made from botanicals that are used to maintain or good for your health may be called herbal products.

(Aday L.)Dietary supplements are widely available through a rapidly expanding market of products that are commonly advertised as being beneficial for health, and disease prevention.

Based on the information, nowadays , the people buy supplements is increasing . Because the citizen have a lot of health problem and they haven’t time to boil a soup ,supplements can help them save the time .Other advantages is the label of the recommended doses on the supplements , we can have a more protective .But to concede the major reason using NHP probably is due by advertising effect .In addition , common wrong in use is appearing in public which may cause serious side effect.

But to concede the major reason of people using NHP, probably is due by advertising effect. In addition, common wrong in use is appearing in public which may cause serious side effect.

may it have any place can improve???

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  • 匿名
    1 十年 前
    最佳解答

    May I ask where you are learning your English (school, adult classes, etc.) What level are you study at (Grade, etc.)?

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  • 匿名
    1 十年 前

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  • 1 十年 前

    Too many mistakes. Giving 5 marks is inadequate.

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