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Correct my english sentance

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Recently, my TV was found out of order.

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  • 1 十年前
    最愛解答

    我認為芢講可以較簡單&明白!

    Recently, I found my TV was running out of order.

    資料來源: 希望可以給你作個參考la~
  • 1 十年前

    Thank you all of you.

  • ?
    Lv 7
    1 十年前

    004 gives the most sound correction.

  • Ling
    Lv 7
    1 十年前

    Your sentence is for spoken English.

    Proper written English will be

    :-

    My TV was out of order last Sunday.= TV was out of order for one day only.

    or

    My TV has been out of order recently = TV has been out of order for some time and it is still out of order now

    or

    My TV has been out of order since last Sunday. = TV was out of order last Sunday and it it still out of order now.

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  • 1 十年前

    The correct answer is

    Recently, my TV has been found out of order. (present perfect tense).

    The reason for using present perfect tense is that your TV was out of order a few days/a few moment ago and it is still out of order now. When we use the words "recently" or "lately", we usually use present perfect tense to describe this situation. This is English usage.

    2010-03-17 11:20:55 補充:

    (present perfect tense in passive voice)

  • 1 十年前

    I agree with 001's answer. For 002, although the sentence without the word "found" is grammatically correct, it doesn't carry the same meaning. For example, consider this sentence. "The man was dead" does not mean the same as "The man was found dead".

  • 1 十年前

    If you use "Recently", do you mean that the TV is still out of order now? If so, I suggest to change to "my TV is out of order recently" or "my TV is not working properly".

    Otherwise, you may replace "recently" with "lately". "my TV was out of order lately" or "my TV was not working lately".

  • YY
    Lv 6
    1 十年前

    個found字可以刪除

  • Peter
    Lv 7
    1 十年前

    沒有問題,文法正確。

    2010-03-18 13:45:34 補充:

    個 found 字不可刪除,否則意思會改變。用中文講:「我的電視最近壞了」和「我發現我的電視最近壞了」並不相同。

    還有,如果不用簡單過去式而用過去完成式就有邏輯問題。因為「發現」電視壞了的這一個動作是一個 instant 動作,你斷不會從上星期(舉例來說)到講這句話時仍然在「發現」電視壞了!

    至於「Recently, I found my TV was running out of order」這句文法錯誤。

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