hyt 發問於 社會及文化語言 · 1 十年前

Correct grammar mistake2

My teacher doesn't give me a score until i correct all the grammarical mistake..PLEASE HELP!!!!

Last week, I opened a checking account at bank. I talked to the teller with my broken English, “Can I open a checking accountant?” The young teller asked me, ”Are you Chinese?” I replied to her, “Yes.” Then, she told me, “Have a seat first. I find someone who speaks Chinese for you.” Based on American-Chinese were limited, I had waited about half hour to have a service at bank.

Being an immigrant has many challenges in the new country. Nevertheless, I believe if I keep adding more effort in English, everybody will understand what I am trying to say in one day. Moreover, I would like to show appreciation to Amy Tan because I got pleasure reading “Mother Tongue”. Tan raises a vital issue of the immigrant family. I think Tan's mother played a great role in learning of English. Also, I admire Tan’s writing very much because she has an uncanny ability to express her thoughts clearly. “Mother Tongue” is a beautiful passage. And through the essay, I think Tan wants to send a powerful message of how we ought to view people by their beautiful side, but not by their shortcomings.

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  • Peter
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    1 十年前
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    "Can I open a checking accountant?" — accountant 是會計,應改為 account。

    "I find someone who speaks Chinese for you." — I'll find someone who speaks Chinese.

    "Based on American-Chinese were limited, I had waited about..." — As there were not a lot of Chinese-speaking staffs, I had waited for about...

    "I keep adding more effort..." — I keep paying more effort

    "everybody will understand what I am trying to say in one day" — everybody will understand what I try to say one day

    "a vital issue of the immigrant family" — a vital issue of an immigrant family

    "in learning of English" — in learning English

    "a beautiful passage. And through the essay..." — a beautiful passage and through the essay...

    "a powerful message of how we ought to..." — a power message on how we ought to

    "beautiful side, but not by their shortcomings" — beautiful side rather than their shourtcomings

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