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幫我check下有冇錯丫,THZ>_<~ In 2009, I had lots of things need to improve as I have not done enough exercise, afraid for speak English and ate lots of junk food. Sometimes, I had a little quarrel with my friends. I think I was detestable! So, I must improve my English and behave myself. In 2010, my new... 顯示更多 幫我check下有冇錯丫,THZ>_<~

In 2009, I had lots of things need to improve as I have not done enough exercise, afraid for speak English and ate lots of junk food. Sometimes, I had a little quarrel with my friends. I think I was detestable! So, I must improve my English and behave myself.
In 2010, my new year’s resolutions are keep fit, save money and improve my English. First, I will do exercise (ride bicycle, run or jump the rope) at least 15 minutes every weekend. I want to grow taller! Second, I will save $50 every month because we should put money aside for a rainy day. Third, I will speak more English. I will speak English when I talk with my friends. I will listen more English song too.
I hope I can finish my target and have a happy new year.
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