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題目:the person I most admire

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  • 1 十年前
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    (The person I most admire)

    The person I most admire is my amiable mother. She has a long smooth hair, a beautiful mouth and two big lovely eyes. She likes to wear a pink dress with red hues on it, which can specifically reveal her beauty. However, this is not the most important...

    I can feel that, her love is infinite. She sacrifices her time to help me, to play with me, to look after me and even tell interesting stories when I'm attempting to fall asleep. I can even see she has sacrificed her beauty and time to look after me, which ultimately she wouldn't get anything but my discourteousness. Mother's love forever has not actually made concessions...She still treats me really nice, teaching me repeatably to be a good person, to have a proper etiquette and show reverences to the others.

    She is really the person I most admire. Her spacious love is being infinite, and forever...

    2009-01-02 18:03:02 補充:

    I don't know if you like it or not because this piece of writing mainly focuses on mother's love...but I do hope this would be useful for you!

    2009-01-02 18:23:04 補充:

    Changes(Mistakes): Beautiful mouth(doesn't make sense)

    Beautiful lip(美麗的)

    Cardinal lip(深紅的/鮮紅的)

    Reddish lip(淡紅的)

    2009-01-03 19:04:50 補充:

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    (Super Simple version)

    (First paragraph) The person I most admire is my mom. She has long hair and two big eyes. She has a small red lip. She often has a smile across her face, especially in front of me. When I cry, she will comfort me and pat my hair.

    2009-01-03 19:05:16 補充:

    I can't use words to describe how she loves me.

    (Second paragraph) When I’m trying to fall asleep, she’ll get a storybook and read it to me as I gradually fall asleep. At daytime, she tidies the house and cleans everything, which I know it is a hard work for her.

    2009-01-03 19:06:03 補充:

    However she often says that she doesn’t care, this is her job.

    (Third Paragraph) Everyday when I’m back from school, she will give me a kiss, and I’ll bump into her and hug her really tight. At that time I can feel the actual warm, cozy familiar feeling, which I feel really sweet.

    2009-01-03 19:06:16 補充:

    (Fourth paragraph) I love my mom, and she loves me as well. I feel proud of being her son/daughter.

    2009-01-03 19:06:32 補充:

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  • 4 年前

    wagnaria

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    1 十年前

    {我多數敬佩的人員}

    I admire personnels is my mother,she is tall .she has a long hair and big eyes.she always takes me to school and do housework.Every morning,she do breakfast for me.On afternoon,she do lunch for me.At night,she do dinnie for me!She do many housework at home.She is hardworking.She set the table,sweep the floor ,wash the disher,another.I like her very much.I sleep,she kiss me every night,she do every thing I like it.I love and like my mother very much.

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