lp 發問於 社會及文化語言 · 1 十年前

A very short poem=]{即時要””10點}

要作個English short poem

about 我既 fD

我作左頭2句

My best friend is Apple.

She likes eating apples.

She born on April.

幫我作多3至5句

`^.^

唔該也Xd.

tHx!!!!!

即時要滴!!!

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  • 1 十年前
    最愛解答

    請不要介意我改了第二句,因為有rhyming pattern的話,會是比較好。

    Best Friend Apple

    My best friend is Apple.

    She was born in April.

    She likes yellow maple.

    She loves drawing angel.

    She always helps the poor people

    and that makes her looks beautiful.

    Being cheerful, her principle.

    Having her here, it's wonderful

    Rhyming Pattern為:ABAB

    第1句和第3句同韻;2和4亦是;

    5和7同韻;6和8同韻。

    音節:

    第一段,每句6個音節。

    第二段,每句8個音節。

    2008-09-22 21:32:50 補充:

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  • 1 十年前

    My best friend is Apple

    She likes eating apples

    She was born in April

    She is living in Taipo

    She goes to school by bicycle

    She is lovely, don't you think so?

    資料來源: myself
  • 1 十年前

    My best friend is Apple.

    She likes eating apples.

    She born on April.

    She look like Animal.

    She has two Nipple.

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