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Sometimes there are good stuff to eat such as longans and lycheese. Sometimes there are juicy pineapples and wax apples. The lion cub will put them all in his mouth.

~~~Follow by its Delicious voice. In a sunny day morning, the hunter and the lion discovered sugar-cane on their way of hunting. Therefore, the hunter took out a strong axe to cut the long sugar-cane down. After eating… The lion feels that the fruit is hard but sweet and juicy. The lion is fall in love with this fruit.

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  • 1 十年 前
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    Sometimes, there are some good things to eat such as longans and lycheese. There are also some juicy pineapples and wax apples. The lion cub always put them all in its mounth at once, then it will yell out "Delicious!!!". One morning, the hunter and the lion discovered some sugar-cane during their way of hunting. The hunter took out a strong axe then cut the long sugar-cane into half. Then they started to taste some. The lion thought that the cane was very sweet and juicy. Even though it was hard to bite, the lion love it so much.

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  • 1 十年 前

    Sometimes there were good fruit to eat, such as longans and lychees. Sometimes there were juicy pineapples and delicious apples. The lion cub would put them all in his mouth ...... followed by a sign of satisfaction and appreciation. On a sunny morning, the hunter and the lion discovered some sugar canes when hunting. The hunter took out a strong axe to cut a sugar cane down. After eating, the lion found that the cane was hard but sweet and juicy. The lion then fell in love with this fruit.

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