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CHeCk 語法~幫我睇下邊到錯左,thx

As a child, Blyton believed that she would become the musician. However, her real passion was writing the stories and poems,which she sent to various magazines. In the 1930s, Blyton's stories began to attract the wide audience.In the 1949,Blyton published Little Noddy Goes to Toyland, a story of a little toy man.Its sales exceeded an expectations and other Noddy books followed in rapid succession. Books were beautifully illustrated by the man named Harmesn van der Beek.

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    1 十年前
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    這段文字的錯處是出於「冠詞」(article) 的運用。

    As a child, Blyton believed that she would become a musician (不是 'the' musician). However, her real passion was writing stories and poems (stories and poems 之前不能用 definite article 'the'), which she sent to various magazines. In the 1930s, Blyton's stories began to attract a wide audience (不是 'the' wide audience). In 1949 (年份1949 之前沒有 'the'), Blyton published Little Noddy Goes to Toyland, a story of a little toy man. Its sales exceeded expectations (不是 'an' expectations, 亦不需要任何冠詞) and other Noddy books followed in rapid succession. The books (books 之前必需有 definite article 'the') were beautifully illustrated by a man (man 之前是 indefinite article 'a', 不是 'the') named Harmesn van der Beek.

    總結:不能分辨應該用 definite article 或是 indefinite article, 亦不知那時要用冠詞, 那時不用。

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