匿名
匿名 發問於 社會及文化語言 · 1 十年前

請各高手校對文法,

I am a Form 6 student who acts as monitress, vice-chairperson of badminton team and chairperson of chess club. Therefore, I develop good communication skills and good at organization through be in touch with different teachers and students.

請列明有任何可以改善/錯誤,謝謝!

更新:

如何證明一名中六學生是quick learner and excited with new challenge?有什麼examples?

3 個解答

評分
  • 1 十年前
    最愛解答

    Hopes you like this one....

    圖片參考:http://hk.yimg.com/i/icon/16/1.gif

    I am a Form 6 student. Currently, I am a monitress, the vice-chairperson/chairman of the badminton team, and the chairperson/chairman of the chess club. As the result of my active participation in extra curricular activities, I have developed good communication skills and strong organization abilities as I liaise and work with my teachers and fellow students.

    資料來源: Myself . 我住在美國
  • 1 十年前

    Because I am the monitor, vice-chairman of the badminton team and the chairman of the chess club, I have developed excellent organisation as well as communication skills through the constant coordination between different teaching staff and students.

  • 1 十年前

    I am a Form 6 student who act as a monitress, the vice - chairperson of a badminton team and the chairperson of a chess club. Therefore, i have developed good communication skills and good organization skills by working with different teachers and students.

    Here, i didn't changed much, i just corrected your gramma, by the way is this for a resume or something???

還有問題嗎?立即提問即可得到解答。