ka man 發問於 社會及文化語言 · 1 十年 前

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15.rushed out for a gathering which her brothers and sisters

16. which live in the same district.

17. They had the habit of meeting one other the every weekend.

18. Usually , they had breakfast together in restaurant,

19. but sometime they just talked in the park nearby.

20. They had a very friend relation with one other.

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  • 1 十年 前
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    15.rushed out for a gathering which her brothers and sisters

    **replace "which" by "with"

    16. which live in the same district.

    **replace "which" by "who

    17. They had the habit of meeting one other the every weekend.

    **replace "one" by "each"

    **delete "the"

    18. Usually , they had breakfast together in restaurant,

    **add "a" before "restaurant"

    19. but sometime they just talked in the park nearby.

    **replace "sometime" by "sometimes"

    **replace "the" by "a"

    20. They had a very friend relation with one other.

    **replace "friend relation" by "friendly relationship"

    **replace "one" by "each"

    See if this helps.

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  • 1 十年 前

    Complete sentences will be better to correct.

    15. she rushed out to a gathering with her brothers and sisters.

    16. Who lives in the same district?

    OR ...whom lives in the same district.

    17. They have/had the habit of meeting (each other)/(one another) every weekend.

    18. They usually have/had breakfast in the restaurant,

    19. but sometimes they just talked in the nearby park.

    20. They have/had a very friendly/closed relation.

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