willis 發問於 社會及文化語言 · 1 十年前

徵求修正郵件內容!!!!!

Dear Hele Huo,

It's great to have an opportunity to meet you on last Tuesday, as you might knew , we couldn't to cooperate with you on the project of "DPF Wood Frame"

due to the price we quoted was coundn't meet your target which you're buying.

However, this was a chance to know each other and hope we'll have more opportunities to cooperate with other projects in near future.

To know more our company , you're welcome to visit our website at

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  • 1 十年前
    最愛解答

    Dear Hele Huo,

    It's great to have an opportunity to meet you on last Tuesday,

    CHANGE TO: It was a precious opportunity to meet you last Tuesday.

    as you might knew , we couldn't to cooperate with you on the project of "DPF Wood Frame"

    CHANGE TO: As you know, we could not cooperate in the project of " DPF Wood Frame"

    due to the price we quoted was coundn't meet your target which you're buying.

    CHANGE TO: since our suggested price was unable to meet your purchasing target.

    However, this was a chance to know each other(correct)

    and hope we'll have more opportunities to cooperate with other projects in near future.

    CHANGE TO: And hope we'll have more opportunities to cooperate in other projects in the nearest future.

    To know more our company , you're welcome to visit our website at

    CHANGE TO: If you are interested to know our company further, you are welcome to visit our website at....

    2007-05-26 12:24:38 補充:

    我用了‘in the nearest future’和加了‘If you are interested’,是想增加熱誠的語氣,不知適用與否,hope I can help!

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    1 十年前

    Dear Mr.XX/Ms. XX ,

    It was indeed a great pleasure for me to meet you last Tuesday . As you know, we couldn' t cooperate with you in the project " DPF Wood Frame " because our offer /the prices we quoted wouldn' t meet your procurement budget .

    However , this meeting already provided a good chance for us to know each other . I sincerely hope that we shall have another chance to make cooperation in other project in the near future .

    For further information about our company, kindly visit our website at XXXX .

    Hope this helps !

  • 1 十年前

    **be polite, you should address the addressee "Mr. Huo" or Ms. Huo", calling the full name is rude.

    **try to put one idea in each sentence, this helps express clearly

    Dear Hele Huo,

    It's great to have an opportunity to meet you on last Tuesday,

    **It is a pleasure meeting you last Tuesday.

    as you might knew , we couldn't to cooperate with you on the project of "DPF Wood Frame" due to the price we quoted was coundn't meet your target which you're buying.

    **You might have noticed that we could not work with you on the project of the "DPF Wood Frame". The reason is that our quote does not meet your procurement budget.

    However, this was a chance to know each other and hope we'll have more opportunities to cooperate with other projects in near future.

    **However, this enables us to know each other. Hopefully, we would have other opportunities to work together in future.

    To know more our company , you're welcome to visit our website at

    **If you wish to know more about our company, please visit our website at ...

    Hope this helps.

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