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s!u婷 發問於 社會及文化語言 · 1 十年前

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1.Let's help the orphans.

2.The police were attack the thief.

3.Can mend my T-shirts?

4.I am very happy!Because I can go to the cencert with my classmates.

5.The beggar are eating the soraps.

6.We played the badmin ton in the alley yesterday.

7.Please don't eavesdrop when we are talking.

8.the game made me want to screamout.

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  • 1 十年前
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    1.Let's help the orphans. - This sentence is OK

    2.The police were attack the thief

    Correct: The police attacked the thief.

    Or, The thief attacked the police.

    3. Can mend my T-shirts?

    Correct: Can you mend my T-shirts?

    4.I am very happy!Because I can go to the cencert with my classmates.

    Correct: I am very delighted that I can go to the concert with my classmates.

    5.The beggar are eating the soraps.

    Correct: The beggar is eating ______ (I don't know what soraps is)

    6.We played the badmin ton in the alley yesterday.

    Correct: We played badminton in the alley yesterday.

    7.Please don't eavesdrop when we are talking - This sentence is OK.

    8.the game made me want to screamout.

    Correct: The game was so exciting and I screamed.

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  • 1 十年前

    1.Let's help the orphans.

    OK

    2.The police were attack the thief.

    Tense: replace "attack" by "attacked by"

    3.Can mend my T-shirts?

    Omission of subject: add "you" before "mend"

    4.I am very happy!Because I can go to the cencert with my classmates.

    OK

    or use one sentence: I am very happy because I can go to the cencert with my classmates.

    5.The beggar are eating the soraps.

    Use of English: "beggar" is a countable noun. Therefore, replace "are" by "is"

    Spelling: replace "soraps" by "scraps"

    6.We played the badmin ton in the alley yesterday.

    spelling: replace "badmin ton" by "badminton" :)

    perposition: at a place, therefore, replace "in" by "at"

    7.Please don't eavesdrop when we are talking.

    OK, I learn the "eavesdrop" from you. A good word.

    8.the game made me want to screamout.

    Capital: replace "the" by "The"

    Use of English: Consider this: The game nearly made me scream.

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  • 1 十年前

    All Right~!!!

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