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s!u婷 發問於 社會及文化語言 · 1 十年前

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1.We can join the Sport Club at the Tuen Mun Stadium.

2.I pitch my tent with my friends.

3.They like to celebrate christmas.

4.Nelson and Kitty will be couble.

5.My mum is preparing Christmas Eve dinner now.

6.The cobbers' job is mend shoes.

7.Gary can't find his wallet.

8.Jo Jo speck French fluently.

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  • 1 十年前
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    1.We can join the Sport Club at the Tuen Mun Stadium.

    replace "Sport" by "Sports" - usually there are more than one kind of sport in a Sports Club

    2.I pitch my tent with my friends.

    repalce "pitch" by "pitched" or "have pitched", depends on your meaning

    3.They like to celebrate christmas.

    add "the" before the "Christmas", Christmas is a festival, therefore, it needs an article before and the first alphabet should be in capital letter

    4.Nelson and Kitty will be couble.

    replace "couble" by "a couple", means husband and wife soon

    5.My mum is preparing Christmas Eve dinner now.

    add "the" before Christmas

    6.The cobbers' job is mend shoes.

    add "to" before "mend"

    7.Gary can't find his wallet.

    I think this one is correct.

    8.Jo Jo speck French fluently.

    replace "speck" by "speaks"

    Hope this helps.

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    1 十年前

    1. We can join the Sport Club at the Tuen Mun Stadium.

    Correction : We can join the sport(s) club at Tuen Mun Stadium. 這裡的 sport(s) club 不是專有名詞 (proper noun), 不用大寫 Sport(s) Club。不過, 最大錯處是 Tuen Mun Stadium 之前是沒有冠詞 the;例如「旺角球場」是 Mong Kok Stadium,「香港大球場」是 Hong Kong Stadium, 都是沒有冠詞的。

    2. I pitch my tent with my friends.

    Correction : I pitched my tent with my friends. 過去發生的事情動詞要用過去式, 動詞 pitch 的 past tense 是 pitched。

    3. They like to celebrate christmas.

    Correction : They like to celebrate Christmas. 「聖誕節」是 Christmas, 要大寫。

    4. Nelson and Kitty will be couble.

    Correction : Nelson and Kitty will be a couple. 估計句子中的 couble 應該是 couple (夫婦、情侶), 而 前面需要加上 ‘a’。文法更正了, 但這一句的意思有些怪, 在缺乏上文下理情況下, 通常是很少單說這麼一句的。如果說現在, 會是 Nelson and Kitty are a couple;如果說將來, 會用 Nelson and Kitty will make a (perfect) couple ( Nelson 和 Kitty 將來會成為情侶, 或 Nelson 和 Kitty 將會是天造地設的一對)。

    5. My mum is preparing Christmas Eve dinner now.

    The sentence is correct ( Christmas Eve 之前沒有冠詞 the).

    6. The cobbers' job is mend shoes.

    Correction : The cobbers' job is mending shoes. 如果句中的人物只是一人, cobbers' 便應改為 cobber's。

    7. Gary can't find his wallet.

    The sentence is correct.

    8. Jo Jo speck French fluently.

    Correction : Jo Jo speaks French fluently.

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