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SETTLEMENT LETTER

各位高人, 小弟想問以下寫法有冇問題呢?

有關收到客的找數后出的信件. 

Upon the receipt of your payment for settling the loan dated 28th April, 2007, please note that the outstanding of your loan account have now been settled.

Should you have any queries, please feel free to contact xxxx at 1234-5679.

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  • Barbie
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    1 十年 前
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    Upon the receipt of your payment for settling the loan dated 28th April, 2007, please note that the outstanding of your loan account have now been settled.

    Should you have any queries, please feel free to contact xxxx at 1234-5679.

    --> dated 改為on好d

    --> please note 改為please be noted,因為客戶是被通知的,要用passive voice

    --> the outstanding 改為all the outstanding,因為你意思應該係個客比哂d欠款吧

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  • 1 十年 前

    Upon the receipt of your payment, we have settled the loan the date of 28th April, 2007, please note that the amount of your loan account have now been settled.

    Should you have any queries, please feel free to contact xxxx at 1234-5679.

    資料來源: Longman dictionary
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