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dfg g 發問於 社會及文化語言 · 1 十年前

有沒有人可以幫我改一改文法&改通順一點??(英文好的請進)

In the society base on the value of heterosexual, homosexual is being discriminated and being excluded by the mass so the debate of homosexual is continuing.

Although the discrimination against the homosexual is obviously enhanced, my hypothesize is that the majority still have discrimination against homosexual and use prejudiced vision to look them because many people still can not accept the homosexual.

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For example, when they discuss the topic about homosexual, their eyes always show a message that they feel it disgusting and unacceptable.

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  • 1 十年前
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    Based on the value of heterosexual why homosexual is discriminated and excluded by the mass people and the debating is being continued? It is because most people who discriminates against the homosexual and agreed with heterosexual. For example, when you discuss the topic about homosexual with someones, their eyes always shows a message to you that you are disgusting and unacceptable. Notwithstanding the discrimination against the homosexual has obviously enhanced. In my opinion, the government shall have extending the education for the discrimination against the homosexual and let’s people who don’t use the prejudiced vision on the homosexual, as they cannot accept.

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  • 阿旦
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    1 十年前

    第一句後半可用以下來表達:

    There has been still a huge controversy over acceptance of being homosexual.

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  • 1 十年前

    In the heterosexual-based society, homosexual is discriminated and excluded by the mass and the debate of homosexual is continuing.

    Although the discrimination against the homosexual is obviously enhanced, my hypothesize is that the majority still has discrimination against homosexual and look them down because homosexual is not yet accepted by many people. For example, when they discuss the topic about homosexual, their eyes always show a message that they feel it disgusting and unacceptable.

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