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In my heart,Mr. Sun Yat-sen is China hero. Mr. Sun Yat-sen is the father of Modern China. Mr. Sun Yat-sen can actually become excellent life of doctor ,but he chooses difficult revolutionary work.Mr.Sun Yat-sen make sacrifices for county and people. He use to time,spiritand energies on the revolutionary ideal.He the purpose is not for the money and fame.Mr. Sun Yat-sen make sacrifice for county spirit,very worth our studying.

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    I believe that Mr. Sun Yat-sen is Chinas hero with all my heart, because he is the father of Modern China. He could have become a doctor and lead a luxurious and comfortable life, but he chose to pour his heart and soul into tough and arduous revolutionary work instead. Mr.Sun Yat-sen made numerous sacrifices for his country and the Chinese people. He devoted his time, spirit and energy on his revolutionary ideals. His ultimate goal was not money and fame. We should learn from his patriotic and self-sacrificing spirit.

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